by legerdemer
Very nice, Mer. This is not a criticism if illustration: I think the words speak for themselves.
but I also find the illustrations very pleasing, They are also educational, and not it the usual way here at Lit.
this is a hell of a beautiful Poem esp. the Killer lines :--
Fate plays us like a hula-hoop
round her waist , hips gyratin' , laughin'
until , exhausted , she will let the hoops fall.
Fave-ed'n Five-ed !!!