All Comments on 'Party Potion'

This was a great read, although the mind control aspect could have been played up a little more.

It started off quite well, I thought Sam at least had some really good character to him, but Lester developed his 'bravado' far too quickly. The raunchy parts were also far too short, and it ended right when the whole story opened up!

I enjoyed it for the most part, but i do agree that you could of done a lot more with this. I know when writing, the build up can get to the point that you just want to get it done and over with, but for a story about a kid losing his virginity, you could of had a little more detail.

I really liked it, and want to find out how the party ends and what Sam and Lester does next with the potion. Do they take it with them when they go to college and use it to get into a fraternity, and so on

Spectacular scenario, RichPastries. Thank you for penning this.

Personally, I would love to see a version from Sam's perspective.

Think about it. And thanks again!