Sun Hee Ch. 01

Hot!!

Great tease story! Hope you continue!!!

No way

There is no way that he should ever be allowed to fuck her. The closest that he should get should be to be allowed to clean up after a real man has fucked her (a BBC possibly?). White boys are only good for licking pussy.

Hnng

I feel his pain. I was honestly about to bust, then she turned coat. I'm begging you to continue.

Perfect Asian Teen Tease!

The story had a great twist because first we thought Sun was going to be this sweet an innocent FOB pure Asian virgin, but she turned out not to be. And to make things more interesting, she has turned the tables on him and made him promise not to cum, she is kind of making him the virgin instead, what a tease!

I don't think she will ever let him penetrate her now, he will be denied forever. He lost his chance, now he is stuck in this form of relationship with her, she loves having control for the first time in her life. If she ever let him fuck her, she might lose it, and she's not going to do that.

She is an exotic Korean girl too. Not only is he held captive by her beauty, but because she's from a different country he feels it's his duty to not upset her in any way. He will do anything she says.

Hot as it gets!

I've read this story a half dozen times already. This is by far my favorite story I read in a long time. Good writing please continue this series I love it!

"Did you like that you didn't get to cum?"

"I liked that part, too." She smiled playfully.
Hell NO, dude what are you thinking !
Like your story, sexual, stimulating, and total fantasy. Speaking for my self-interest, no condom no problem. Good story.

Great storytelling

Extremely well written story, great use of American English language, excellent wording choices. You've mastered the art of writing erotic literature quite well without lapsing into any of the classical Literotica cliches. Very well done, hope to see much much more of your work. Cheers,

This is excellent writing -- not just excellent 'erotic' writing. Well-paced, engaging, believable, the only fault is that it makes the reader want to wait till part 6 before he's done with it, and clearly that's a good thing ;).

What a day-and-night difference, to go from reading Marcel Proust's depiction of sex with Albertine to reading this (within an hour of each other). :-)