All Comments on 'Turning Pages Ch. 01'

A nice safe start to the story. I hope that you go into a little more detail of each character, such as physical description, history of the individuals background and their style/taste in clothing. I look forward to chapter 2.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter. And the next. And the next. I wish it was longer then one page though. I love long stories. But for now you have me intriqued.

You have given us a brief introduction with this post, but it has been enough to whey my appetite. I look forward to reading much more. Thank you, and welcome to Literotica, I think you are going to be very popular here. Five stars.

But please make the next installment much longer. 2 Literotica pages minimum would be great, just to give us something to get excited about. Lack of any sex this early on is fine, but at least give us something more interesting to ponder.

Regardless definitely keep writing!

I like where this is heading, please don't keep up hanging.

Hmm, inquiring minds want to know...