All Comments on 'Family and Friends Miss Playoffs'
by Imstillfun
- 25 Comments
Anonymousover 8 years agoIt builds and it builds. And ends with a great punchline, too. Totally crazy.
Six stars.
Anonymousover 8 years agoThe real issue? Sounds like she lives at home with mom and dad. Making several of the girls in High school and probably not 18. Which is a no no on this site. Since everyone present are really nasty , whorish people this was no fun to read. "1".
Anonymousabout 8 years agoA lot of they did 'this' and 'that' but very little describing the action. It has a lot of sex, but it doesn't come across as 'sexy.'
Its not bad, it just needs to be fleshed out more.
onthesidelines55over 7 years agoI have recently found this authors work and I love the setup and the thought patterns. There is a great mix of situation set up and actual activity description. I identify with the cucks and giving men in the stories and this is another great depiction of that. Thanks.
Youngnhotover 7 years agoI really enjoyed every aspect of the story, especially the teasing and verbal taunting. I agree that it needs to be a little more descriptive. I would like to see a continuation with another teenage girl (a virgin) and maybe another teenage boy or two. Maybe you could add a little descriptive porn viewing with everybody watching and getting turned on before getting into their own hot, descriptive action. Maybe the videos they watch could be some that Mrs H secretly recorded from previous activities in the living room. Use your imagination. I will be looking forward to reading it! Thank you!
Anonymousover 5 years agoI loved this. I especially liked Mrs. H. when she eagerly joined in the slutty teasing and even more when she taunted her husband and talked to him while the men fingered her and fucked her, and best of all, when she encouraged all the men to fuck her daughter. An ideal slutty mom!
Anonymousabout 5 years agohe criticized it for the characters being nasty. uh, you do realize what website you’re on, right? this is a porn story site. they’re supposed to do nasty things.
blackknight314almost 5 years agoOnly in your wildest dreams could this happen. I'm going to jack off and then go to bed for some sweet dreams.
Anonymousabout 4 years agoI've fallen in love with this author's stories and this one was no exception. Please keep them coming!
Paso_Doblealmost 3 years agoWow very hot, I was hoping Mrs H would encourage the girls, you did not disappoint
dirtyoldbimanover 2 years agoLOL, all good teasing fun until part 3. I would have been happy at 1 and 2 although Kara taking 5 loads before sitting on her Dad's cock was great
Anonymousover 2 years agoI think you should write a new one where one woman takes 6 loads in her pussy.
Anonymousabout 2 years agoThis was definitely HOT as hell if a little unrealistic.
About the only thing missing was the two girls eating each other.
Good job. I like a story like this every so often.
Bill S.
Azdesertcplover 1 year agoAs someone else noted, I much preferred the first two pages to the finale. But overall this was an extremely hot and well written story. Many good bits 👏👏
Anonymousover 1 year agoI couldn't believe Kara did not suck her father's cock while bent over toward him and being fucked by a succession of young studs but she made up for that lack by riding him at the end.
Two sluttish girls convert the whole family to their sluttishness.
Jamjohnny9 months agoGreat story. Loved the build up. I'd fuck either of the girls. Keep up the good work. 5 stars
Anonymous3 months agoGreat total incest fantasy. Did not finish it. Had to go after my GF; she was reading it with me and started my attack. I am glad Ricky got to fuck someone. He deserved it, even though it was his mom and sister. Did he fuck "you"? I hope so. I will continue when we finish. Thank you.
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