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Frustrating
Some times you are very good. At times like this, you are barely mediocre.
Uh
That was good--I think.
Ghost story
It would seem that a few people are having trouble recognizing a ghost story when they read it. Halloween at midnight in New Orleans when the wall between worlds is at it's weakest. Seems there was a breakthrough!!
YAWN, most boring thing I have ever read on this site.
Lovely
I enjoyed your story very much. The setting was minimal but well drawn and the characterization was very effective. There were a few distracting editing mistakes but what was there was so well wrought that I still gave it a five. Thanks for an enjoyable story.
My favorite part-
"I leaned in and placed a kiss atop her moving fingers, letting my lips stay there against the warm, damp, pink silk fabric."
Strange story. Sexy and strange.
good start
Ahhh. It was getting good any more?
I can honestly say that this story confused the fucking hell out of me but non the less a good read, just wish we could know what happens.
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