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Great pee story
Grammar & spelling need a little polish & editing but great story (I read Chapter 1 also). I also indulge in this pastime. Not so much the drinking but definitely the tasting and pussy cleanup. Keep more coming.
Just plain disgusting
And you really need an editor.
love it
outstanding I just hope there is a part three!:)
loving it
Oh how I wish this was me, great stories
Totally enjoyed!
Dear HypnoticGold
Great sequel to the first part. Yet I'll only give you four stars - please take a little more time with editing. At a certain point, the story just seems to run away: typos increase, words are missing, thoughts are rushing.
The story itself remains as great as the first part (which got all five stars), albeit I'd have liked had you given away Cindy later in the story: her early mention of her desire to pee in his mouth takes out quite a bit of the suspense (many other outcomes would have been possible: she doesn't dare, she only lets him watch, she is tricked into it by Sammy...).
Finally: Thanks a lot for this great work and your thrilling fantasies. Keep up the good work - I'll jump strait to part three now!
Best regards
Alpian
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