One Night in Vegas

Loved it

Nmmm, what a delicious story! So too bad she had to leave. Going to check out more if your stories.

Great story!

I figured after wifey was almost stripped naked they would make their way to the couple's room hand have a three-some the rest of the night.
You don't need an editor AS BAD AS SOME OF THE THIRD GRADERS WRITING ON HERE! I basically saw only a couple of places that could be smoothed out. Look forward to more, even with Jim and wifey. Maybe Chrissy slipped her cell number in Jim's pocket??? 5 *'s

OK, if you say so. Guess you needed to get that out of your system?

What was the plot? What was the point? Just a fantasy you wanted to share? Too brief and without purpose or resolution. Would this loving loyal couple succumb to the temptation to bring a third person into their sex life? Would this experience lead them to explore swinging, open marriage, cheating?

I guess it could have been a dramatic opening to an actual story, with many options and possibilities. Maybe you could find an actual writer to take this idea and make it something worth reading?

Super sexy!

Loved it. Just the right amount of description of wife's feelings and of the sexy touching!

What fun!

Wonderful sexy fun. Enjoyed this story immensely. Thanks for writing!

Good story

I thought this was a good story and well written, can't see why others are complaining about it.

Expectations

It's interesting. To me, the story ends there. It was what happened and leaves you feeling what you do.

It built an erotic mood and left you hanging. It was describing an experience, how they felt, what they did.

Not all experience have reasons or go somewhere else. Sometimes they are just what they are.

Expectations?

I'm guessing the expectations were that something more would happen in this too brief vignette. A husband and wife dance. Get involved, briefly, with another woman on the dance floor. Then......nothing. And therein lies the problem. The wife gets all hot and bothered and then the story ends. They don't get involved in a threesome. They don't make an appointment for a future get together. And they don't go back to their room and tear up the sheets. Although that may be implied in your ending. So the crux of the story is their interlude on the dance floor. And your description wasn't hot enough to make the story worth reading. That, to me, is the problem with this.

Glad I had a glass of cold water handy phew

That was hot and if some can't see beyond the scene setting too bad. You don't have to say he took me to my room and fucked me her request to do so was enough. Let imagination run wild from that point.

Nicely done - sexy, yet not disturbing

You're happily married and in love with your wife. Exactly how much naughtiness could you accept? Where's the line between a shared adventure, pushing prior boundaries, and something that causes hurt, harm, lasting questions and consequences? I suspect for most "normal" men (me included), this encounter would be considered very cool and very hot. No counselors or divorce lawyers required. Nice. It's always a pleasure to meet a married couple who love each other. Even in fiction.

Interesting story...but...

Interesting and good short story...but I have a question: If instead a woman it was a man with them? How would feel the husband? Still hot? 3*

Great, I want more

You're a fantastic writer. Please continue this story. xoxoxoxo Annette

Very well done. 4stars, for sure.

I enjoyed it!!

What a great tease!!!!

Very hot!

I for one really enjoyed this. It didn't have to go "all the way" to a threesome. It practically did right there on the dance floor. I would love to have some memories of moments of wild abandon with my spouse that wound up like this, even if it didn't turn into something regular or a redefinition of our relationship. It was short, sweet, and heartwarming, while being a very steamy read. I am going to see if I can get my spouse to read it with me later!

JUST MINDLESS GARBAGE !! "1*" !

One of the bad shit !

Nice snippet

Another nice quick story- 5 stars. 1 star for the douchbag Anon who can't write a coherent sentence.

Great teaser!

Sometimes nice to be left wanting more. This is one. It IS difficult for some of the more angry, controlling readers to find they aren't in control and can only bluster about anonomously.

Feeble minded vile garbage by a gutless fag !

Just 1* !

Great story

I must say, I've become a real fan of your stories. I enjoy reading them on several levels. I'd also like to apologize for all the vile Anonymous comments. I hope they do not bother you. They're just the childish rantings of immature boys. I, at least, am an immature adult male. Thanks again.

Wish for more

but...it was perfect.This is the way to write a sex scene. Build the tension. Describe it without just using male terminology. Increase the suspense. For me, the 2 women and one man is not a turn on. I have had the expereince many times. Too much to count. If they are not interacting like these two did it is just a lot of responsibility. In this story it was just a turn on. Whatever you want to write on Imstillfun I will read the next one. AAAHHHHH. A five.

After

posting my comment I read some of the others. SO many of the anon comments are inconceivable to me. Do they not know good writing. How plotting is best. One of the most difficult tasks in writing a very short story is getting something about the character to the reader. You nailed it. We were with her. Wow. I think my testosterone was converted to estrogen. I may need to take some Aromidex to convert it back. Please keep wrilting. As for you anon folks. Why not read a different catagory or just f... off.