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by Anonymous

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by fifty512/18/04

They say...

... that timing is the essence of good comedy. This story got the timing spot on.

I spent the first couple of screens wondering about the story classification - was I missing the joke?

But then I got sucked into the story. When the penultimate session went awry, I was distraught for the guy!

Then the climax: socked in the chops with a wet transistor!

Masterly!

Eff

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by Selena_Kitt05/01/06

Ouch!

Poor guy. Needs to go out to the pub and buy a flesh and blood girl a drink...? Loved the ending! (At least it wasn't another guy?) :)

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