need to add more passion and imagies...you can feel the hunger and desire ..
by
Anonymous01/06/04
mildly erotic and puzzling
It was somewhat confusing at first how she become aroused soon after seing the couple walk by her window. What would have caused such a reaction. It became clear that the woman walking by was seduced and became her lover, but somewhat still unclear how she ended up in her bed.
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As stated in an earlier comment, maybe just a bit more passion would have helped convey the feeling between the two women.
I gather this was payback time to the boyfriend or maybe husband.
(mondliecht57)
by
Anonymous10/26/06
Such compassion
"What he doesn't know won't hurt him?" Yeah, he's a guy; why would such an intimate betrayal hurt him?
English
Strange
Very strange.
a sweet start
need to add more passion and imagies...you can feel the hunger and desire ..
mildly erotic and puzzling
It was somewhat confusing at first how she become aroused soon after seing the couple walk by her window. What would have caused such a reaction. It became clear that the woman walking by was seduced and became her lover, but somewhat still unclear how she ended up in her bed.
.
As stated in an earlier comment, maybe just a bit more passion would have helped convey the feeling between the two women.
I gather this was payback time to the boyfriend or maybe husband.
(mondliecht57)
Such compassion
"What he doesn't know won't hurt him?" Yeah, he's a guy; why would such an intimate betrayal hurt him?
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