All Comments on 'Gabriella and Logan'

by superssunnyselena

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Logan is an idiot. Why didn't he just tell his best friend that he is interested in Gabby? Does he not trust Brian enough to leave Gabby alone?

superssunnyselenasuperssunnyselenaover 8 years agoAuthor
Anon

I would tell you but that's a spoiler :)! I promise you'll understand when Logan explain it.

redlion75redlion75over 8 years ago

i wouldnt trust the dumbass as far as i could throw the titanic.he shows no respect for any female or his friend since he couldnt tell he was into gabby

sshh1sshh1over 8 years ago
can't wait

Really like it so far!!! Please write more and soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
unrelated rant

I love your story,can't wait to read what comes next! Just a general,nagging issue-i swear to god if I read one more story about a chubby black chick with a drop dead gorgeous white friend,I will scream. Black chicks can be the drop dead gorgeous girl without the extra pounds. We do come in size fit too,ya know!! "Thick thighs" are not just a black thing,just like a flat stomach and athletic build are not just white things. Maybe another author will read this and write accordingly. But I LOOOVE where your story is going!!! Eagerly awaiting subsequent chapter(s)!!!

MikkaRoseMikkaRoseover 8 years ago
Can't wait!!!

Love the story, can't wait for what comes next, please don't keep us waiting to long x

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 8 years ago
Awesome sauce!

These characters crack me up, but Brian is an ass wipe!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
You've got my attention...

Thank you for not making this 1st story so obviously about sex and allowing the build up to happen. It's OK to have a beginning without the males "hit it" right out the front gates of the story although that was clearly on Gabriella's mind.

blueexoticablueexoticaover 8 years ago
Cute Story

This was such a cute story...I look forward to the next installment

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Oh no!

Aaaaargh! Where's the rest. I love reading stories like this. Please update soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Brian

I literally hate Brian! But I love this story.... Still smh at Brian man, either the girl is a bitch for not giving a guy sex or a hoe if she does give a guy sex... Smh! I need the rest of this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Part 2, Please!!!

Hello Suny, please do part 2 VERY SOON! Awesome story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
please write more!

my god this was amazing, please please please write more!!!!!!!!!!

Lulu222Lulu222about 8 years ago
Ready for next chapter

So far I'm hooked & what to read more

Lulu222Lulu222about 8 years ago
Need more

So far I'm hooked & want to read more

butterflybeebutterflybeeabout 5 years ago
More, more!

It was just getting good. I hope you write part 2.

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