Six Weeks of Grace Pt. 01

I'm intrigued! There's a great set-up here that's captured my attention, and I'm interested in reading more. It's too soon to comment on much else but just know this first chapter is a great start :)

What a good start!

I'm enjoying this. It's well written, you have avoided the all too frequent spelling and grammatical mistakes seen on this site, you have introduced your principal character and some others and you leave me wanting more. Well done. I would prefer it if episodes were longer but the content is very promising. Please keep going.

Great Start

Very well written first chapter. I'm liking the character already. This should be a fun ride!

Great beginning

I hope that this story will be a serial and involve several chapters. Looking forward to more.

Nice start!!!

Thanks

I hope you have enjoyed the start of my story. I am adding new parts every day or two, even though they are not working through the system that way. I did get a couple emails and yes I want to assure everyone, this story is complete and will be posted! I also hate an author posting 20 parts of a 25 part story and then disappearing! Thanks again for the comments, votes and emails!

Amazin

Great start. Looking forward to the next chapters

Nice..

Nice character development. I like the way you built up the suspense.

Wonderful

I am loving this story -- please write and post fast!!!

Yes -- all the emotions/reactions you want -- you got it.
5 stars!!

P E R F E C T !

I found this on thefeedback portal. That review of a later chapter caught my attention. You and your characters have caught me. This is beautiful story if it continues like this. Thanks.

wow, what an intriguing opening

looking forward to the next Pt.

Strong

Very strong start. Yes good character development noticed.

Great two pages

There are very few writers even here on lit which can put so much emotion into two pages. Great just simply great start man !!!!!

Really Looking Good.

Can not wait to read further. Engaging plot, appealing characters, and exceptional writting.