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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
Good Flow

While the outcome seemed a bit suprising this is a fun read.My personal prreference is to learn about the charaters through conversation rather than omniscient author description but I realize that is a personal preference and not a negative for the story as a whole

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