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A truly erostic story without the "F" word.
This was a great story and very touching and still erotic. It didn't have to use any vulgarity. I loved it.
Another of Ronde's Superb Works
I have read many of Ronde's efforts and feel he rates a standing ovation. As a previous comment noted, he did it without using the f word.
The human mind is a canvas, and a skilled writer can paint marvelous scenarios with words. Ronde has done this many times for me, and I look forward to his next submission
Ronde is a wordsmith of extroardinary caliber. Thank you, Ronde, you've created yet another smile.
Boswell
literature
A truly erotic tale. Not at all sterotypical. Bravo!!!
beautyful
if there is a better story out there i havent read it i loved every word of this epic erotic story. such a breath of fresh air that it was erotic without vulgar language,a true work of art!!!!!!!
Totally enthralling
Have read a number of stories and this ranks with
the story about the vinery in Michigan which brought
tears to my wife''s eyes. I have enjoyed all of
Ronde's stories, he is a wonderful author.
seafairer4usa
Thank You ronde for one the nicest erotic stories I have read in a long time.
Nicely done
Very good use of descriptive language without use of vulgarity or cliches. I greatly enjoyed your story.
most erotic
This is by far one of the best stories I've read. Very emotional........of course there were errors, probably typos, that did not distract from the story. GREAT JOB
(you guessed it, I'm an English teacher) ;)
Which beach?
All I want to know is which beach this guy combs! He is the guy that we all want to pursue us- both for his sensitivity and cherishing and for his unselfish and earthshaking lovemaking.
Great Story!
What a great story!
Absolutely a work of art. So creative, great descriptions, a good story line, very well written. Very nice work, Ronde. I really enjoyed this story.
Just FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Absolutely wonderful. As a man who is getting older, I can empathize with Joe, we know our best days are behind us but still we feel young. And getting that last chance to please and fulfill a beautiful younger woman is what we so often want and yet miss out on. Ronde in this story and so many others hits straight to the heart and mind of people who love.
Ronde gets another 5
Every time I read one of Ronde's stories, it seems
like they get an automatic score of 5.
These tales are very well written, and enjoyed by guys
like me. Keep the stories coming, Ronde.
Appreciate them. jg
totally engulfing, magnificent
Although I have just started reading your work, I enjoyed this the most so far. You are so descriptive and draw me totally into scenes in an unbelievable way. Your knowledge of sensuality is incredible and quite exciting.
Light and strong, as the sea waves...
Enchanting.
I agree with other comments: you put love and eroticism without anger or crudity.
Nice to read from you more!
Carlo Milano, Italy
Excellent
I wish I'd found Ronde's stories years ago, it's a pity that he seems to have stopped writing, I hope all is well in his life.
It's unusual to find stories in Lit that are of such high quality, absolutely excellent writing.
Wonderful
A beautiful story. Would love to read an ending to the love affair. There is no doubt that I will have to read every one of the stories this author posted. A warm feeling comes over a reader after finishing one of these stories. Well done.
A charming image
What a gorgeous, sun-soaked fantasy. Beautifully written, and lovely in the way it describes people who like each other and want to make each other happy. We need more stories like this.
Sexy, Loving...a classy story
Very sexy story, good characters, believable plot, and very passionate love scenes. Good writing.
a gentle little story
nice and steady and they found love for a brief time but having to wait a year seems too long....a bit like the film Avante.....where they meet once a year.....a nice little tale and the technique used to put gold on the shells sounds good...but can you actually do it....nice one...
A well done story.
I enjoyed the way the characters developed, the friendship blossomed, and love happened. A very good tale, that inspires hope in a lonely old man's heart.
UNLESS HER LAB IS ON THE MOON OR SHE IS MARRIED
why the one year Hiatus. TK U MLJ LV NV
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