Daddy's Naughty Girl

Crap!

Worst story I've seen here for many months.

Not good.

That's all I'm going to say.

Was ok

Wasn't to aroused at the anal part

It's great and that's all I'm going tosay except

I GAVE IT A 5

I took a crap oh ait I mean I took a dear annony and gave this a 5

for effort and content

Short and hot

Would like to see what happens next :-)

Great short story.

After reading some of the other comments, I found them to be unfair and petty. Your stories could be improved, but your thought process in all of three stories you've written got right down to the heat. Don't give up! I personally will be following your progress...with love, a want-to-be-daddy

Okay lets try constructive....

You have some good heat here but your characters seem like they are role playing and forgot who they are. Your "Daddy" has no qualms about fucking his daughters ass? Your daughter gets "caught" masturbating and instantly turns into a street hooker trying to land her next John. The point of the incest and taboo is to build that guilt over finding it so hot when you aren't supposed to think of this person this way. If you changed the names this could be a great erotic coupling or anal story. I think with some character overlay you have a good story.

I'd love to hear more

In your biography you say: “At the heart of every incestuous romance story is an underlying social issue.”

I'd love to know what you mean by this. Can you explain in more detail, perhaps even with examples?

Disbelief unsuspended

I agree with the other comment on here about the way the daughter just shifts from imagining about her dad to totally wanton slut.

but really where i stopped detailed reading and switched to 'skimming' was the part where her dad is all, "18 is too young for masturbating!" anyone who even remotely remembers when they were young knows that masturbating starts a few years before 18 normally. So unless her father was a complete shut-in or the overly zealous religionist type... (neither of which would have gone from 'omg my daughter masturbates' to plowing her like a streetwalker in less than 5 mins) I just can't brign myself to really enjoy this tale due to my disbelief rolling all over it.

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She deserves to be punished. Will he give her a spanking? And will it be a hard spanking?

That was so hot, made me wet.

Hot

It made me so wet 😅

Fuuucck this makes me so wet and horny, I got three fingers in before the end