He had to work and invest for this one . That compounded the interest on payoff scene.
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Anonymous10/08/15
Great story!
I've enjoyed all of the chapters in this story! Pleas keep the story going! I'm looking forward to chapter 4!
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Anonymous10/09/15
Great Story
All your stories are great when will you finish Bad Teacher: Living Together
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Anonymous10/10/15
Boy, Aidan is a real asshole, isn't he?
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Anonymous10/10/15
I love this series of stories
The 18 year old stud hopefully will meet some 40 plus year old women at bars - and make then pay for his sexual services.
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Anonymous10/11/15
More
Like your stories. Hope there will be follow ups with the 18yo stud knocking up the two unprotected ladies.
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Anonymous10/12/15
Bad Teacher
Please Finish the Bad Teacher Series with a couple more chapters, nothing beats that series.
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Anonymous10/16/15
Looking to finish this one?
The stories have been quite good. I hope to see the 4th mom go down, and also repeat performances with the others, with resistance from the moms being gradually overcome.
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Anonymous10/27/15
Almost Perfect
Pretty much every story in the series would be among the site's top All-Time if the person writing them was as skilled at grammar (tenses, verb-vs.adverb, etc.) as they are at the erotic part of things.
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Anonymous11/16/15
Four Moms For Aidan
This isn't your cell phone, spell it out FOUR, FOR. That's another tip: Spell your first ten numbers then change to numerals with 11.
There's a great tale here and I'm enjoying it, but you have introduced three women so far and they're all having, "illicit thoughts." They are different women. You need different adjectives for their musings--and keep them start. That's part of the personality development.
Still a three-star but slipping dangerously to a two.
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Anonymous11/28/15
pregnant
next week when they meet Vanessa will be fertile ?
a good hot story but your spelling & tenses are horrible please find an editor!
I gave it a three out of five as a result or other wise it would have been a 5
English
Likes it Lots !
He had to work and invest for this one . That compounded the interest on payoff scene.
Great story!
I've enjoyed all of the chapters in this story! Pleas keep the story going! I'm looking forward to chapter 4!
Great Story
All your stories are great when will you finish Bad Teacher: Living Together
Boy, Aidan is a real asshole, isn't he?
I love this series of stories
The 18 year old stud hopefully will meet some 40 plus year old women at bars - and make then pay for his sexual services.
More
Like your stories. Hope there will be follow ups with the 18yo stud knocking up the two unprotected ladies.
Bad Teacher
Please Finish the Bad Teacher Series with a couple more chapters, nothing beats that series.
Looking to finish this one?
The stories have been quite good. I hope to see the 4th mom go down, and also repeat performances with the others, with resistance from the moms being gradually overcome.
Almost Perfect
Pretty much every story in the series would be among the site's top All-Time if the person writing them was as skilled at grammar (tenses, verb-vs.adverb, etc.) as they are at the erotic part of things.
Four Moms For Aidan
This isn't your cell phone, spell it out FOUR, FOR. That's another tip: Spell your first ten numbers then change to numerals with 11.
There's a great tale here and I'm enjoying it, but you have introduced three women so far and they're all having, "illicit thoughts." They are different women. You need different adjectives for their musings--and keep them start. That's part of the personality development.
Still a three-star but slipping dangerously to a two.
pregnant
next week when they meet Vanessa will be fertile ?
where is your editor?
a good hot story but your spelling & tenses are horrible please find an editor!
I gave it a three out of five as a result or other wise it would have been a 5
the mentor
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