Six Weeks of Grace Pt. 02

I like it

Of to a great start.

Very good, but...

I'm really enjoying the set up. But you could use an editor to clean up your spelling.

Great start

You managed to get me hooked very quickly. The characters have a real feel about them. Please continue and quickly!

Great stuff

Will continue to read. Love the plot. Good job

Great writing

This is an example of a really well thought out story with characters that have depth. Can't wait to read more. Thank you.

good story, but....

Good writers make use of at least one (often more) proofreaders.

It would help you a lot to find someone that knows the difference between rein and reign, for example.

I'll hold off rating until I see it finished.

Well done!

This story has real potential and I can see future possibilities with just the characters already presented. I like the way you are building the characters and am looking forward to much more. Keep it up!

Super job…

Looking forward to your next installment. Hopefully sooner than later.

Thank you for sharing your story with us.

Brujay

Fantastic story - I love it

loving the possibilities

it is fun discovering the subtleties each character has been given.

Great Stuff!

I have no idea how or why I didn't come across this earlier. I'm hoping there's more stories coming in the near future.
My only criticism is the lack of contact between Don and Grace after the hearing. That would've added some dimension to the story.

Thanks for your efforts...

LAWYERS

A great portrayal of a greedy attorney who wants to control a young girl's inheritance (my inference). Don is no dummy. Great story so far.