All Comments on 'The Contest'

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whatshername86whatshername86over 8 years ago
A contest worth entering.

Very arousing scenario. The spontaneity of the initial encounter was believable and stimulating. I found each get together sexier than the last and when I thought the sex between the couples couldn't get any better, Sybian was introduced. I can speak from experience, the orgasms are incredible and the thought of being watched was mind-blowing. I will definitely be re-reading this story.....many times

arrowglassarrowglassover 8 years ago
A VERY well done!

Great story...well written...passionate...needs more chapters!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Loved It!

My wife has a Sybian and her reactions to it mirror those of Amy and Brenda. As always, this story is superb. Five stars!

maddictmaddictover 7 years ago
On your marks, get set go.......

Very fun, good luck finding another couple like Brenda and Nick. Since Amy is now a sindle rider why don't you ride behind her, leave your cock on the saddle and she sits on everything, I woodent push to far forward however!

crazyoldcootcrazyoldcootabout 6 years ago
WOW!

Great story, but sad ending. Beautifully written and not boring.

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Just a guy who likes to write..........I was born at a very early age but didn’t develop an interest in writing until much later. I began writing fiction in high school and briefly considered a career as a journalist or freelance writer before life steered me in a different di...