In most stories the ending is a wrap up or at best a conclusion. In this case the author just got tired of the story and sadly just quit writing, but then justified it by challenging the reader to write their own ending. Wow! How pretentious..... I really don't like to bust the authors chops, but sometimes the situation beg me to....
But there was no ending! Your a good writer and this seemed like you either got stuck for an ending and quit or or just got tired of the story.
Three stars and thanks for your effort.
While I read the story I though: "This is for sure a 4* story!!". Well written, well-developed, waiting for the writers choice about his decision...Then the writer let's us in the dark...And he forgot something: Sure the genius needed a fuck to clear the mind, but the big question is: "Wouldn't her cheating create remorse in her mind that would conflict with her logic"? I think it would, looking at her uneasyness when she was with him...A remorse mind can't work as needed...That's why the writer would have end the story is own way...He was the one to put the "hero" between a fire and an abyss...And as some reader said 150 miles wasn't so far away that she couldn't call him in urgency...
I concur with most of the previous comments, I think it is better, as some writers do in the prologue, invite others to write an ending. I find it difficult to mark this story because it is not finished. I like stories from this writer and hopefully he will relent and write the ending. She will no doubt justify her actions in the name of science and for any action there can be found a justifiable reason, but of course that does not make it right. My own view is she cheated so "on yer bike dear" end of.
to bad it wasnt finished. if you do finish it, then maybe it will get a better score. that said, divorce her. plus let chad's wife know what was going on also. if you dont divorce her every time she is working and you arent there she will be fucking someone else.
I agree with almost everyone. As good as 9/10's of the writing was and how well the story flowed, and how often I am impressed with imhapless's writings, this ending rated a 0, well a 1. It appears that imhapless did not know how to end the situation. It is the writer's imagination that makes the story work and this ending failed. Most challenges from a writer are to make an alternative ending. This story lacked an ending with which to make an alternative.
Now please tell me more about wife's thoughts. For major crimes, intent is an important component to determine guilt. Murder and manslaughter have a victim. The punishment should fit the crime intended.
at work. and something has been bothering me. even if she did what she did for the best of reasons how can he stay married to her. the whole place where she worked knew what was going on. did they try to stop it or let him know.no in fact they actively tried to hide it when he got there. how can he trust either her or any one else that she works with in the future. all the male DR. that she works with will know that she has no problem fucking around so what do you think they are gonna do. also im disappointed that one of my favorite authors on here would write this story. this story is no different than the other 100's that will twist reality around to make it ok for the husband to accept his wife cheating.she cheated to save my job, she cheated to save our kids. she cheated so save our house. she cheated save her job. she cheated to save the country. now she cheated to cure cancer. all total bullshit.
For someone who is as good a writer as imhapless, this story was a disappointment for its failure to end (as mentioned by others more than once). A good/great writer has skill and imhaplass has it in spades. But a good/great writer also has something others including myself do not have: a certain kind of literary imagination. This story was, until the end, outstanding in that it created a new LW dilemma for the protagonist Kurt and for us readers. But the ending sank like an overweight anchor. It feels like a cop-out. Is it possible that imhapless couldn't figure out an ending? Or is he playing a game? Unlike most other Literotica writers, I would like to hear from imhapless about his justification for ending "For the Greater Good" like he did.
Unfortunatally the Loving Wives hub does wrong effect to the authors. If a Marriage Strife hub was the authors could get big inniciative more and more story would get longer part and we readers could know the future of the couples or ex spouses.
But the lack of ending is chickenshit and hackneyed,to say the least,The Lady or the Tiger always drove me nuts when I had to read it. If the author invited someone else to finish it,I could see it, but this is just irritating.
As far as the dilemma, it is no different if a wife or husband cheated to get ahead at work or for other 'good' reasons.As someone pointed out,if she needed to get laid she could have driven home the three hours,then returned,or had him come there or maybe talked to him about it,see if the cost of helping the brother was worth it,rather than cheating.Among other things,if she could do this so coldly,without guilt, how could he ever trust her,no matter how pure the intent might have been,the ends don"t justify the means always. Genius might excuse some things,but like a Steve Jobs no matter what he accomplished,he still was a complete dick,caught up in his own ego so much he often forgot his humanity,she was much the same. It almost kind of seems that to her,like Jobs,people are there to be used,and when human feelings come in the way,they are meaningless.
I was intrigued by the main characters, in particular the female lead.
I've met a few people kinda like that - a result of a misspent youth surrounded by geeks. The "sex is a bodily function" business isn't that rare... but it isn't as charming as the author tries to make it.
The solution to the dilemma is not visible, because it depends on the female leads' justification. The justification may be very good, or it may expose the difference in attitudes and expectations of the leads in the story as to their relationship. What the justification >is< defines what is really happening in the story.
So... yeah, I suppose I could make a stab, but frankly asking the readership to imagine the inner motivations of a stinkin' genius seems to me to be the wrong decision.
Green-something
(starting such speculation is not totally useless - but how are we to have any idea if we are even close?)
If we accept the silly premise the way forward is pretty simple. She makes a clean breast of it. He tells her of his pain and says never again. She accepts with appropriate contrition or he walks. Problem solved.
Speaking of good ole bob what happened to him I have t seen a new story in like a year... And hapless buddy there is no ending here but to finish it off for u he tells her he knows how she gets through her problems when she's stuck, kicks her ass out and since she earns more n all gets half of her shit
I think njlauren said it well. I chose to read this knowing it was likely to lead to reconciliation if not full blown cucking. It was posted by a writer that writes well but chooses subjects I rarely agree with. You asked people to finish it if they didn't like yours. Excuse me, what finish are you talking about? You created a scenario and left it hanging. If this was some grand scheme of starting something and allowing others to finish as they see fit then say that up front. Cheap and cowardly is how I'd term your decision. Because of that, not the adultery, I will rate this lower than I would have otherwise.
P.S.: I wonder if Dr. Paxton would have as easily allowed HIS own wife to do whatever it takes to find the cure. Turning a blind eye to their behavior and begging for hubby nit to interfere probably upset me as much as anything else you wrote...probably because it is, UNFORTUNATELY, the most believable part of the tale.
...people doing evil because "the end justifies the means." Unfortunately, the means used ALWAYS pervert the desired goal. Decent story but extremely lame ending. Perhaps not your best work, but thank you for sharing it with us. I look forward to your next submission.
And about the time she had to move out of town, I actually stopped reading and said to myself 'this is a delight to read'. Good pacing. Interesting characters. A unique situation.
And it raises interesting questions: What does he owe the woman who saved his brother's life? Would you, dear commenter, if through some contrived scenario, if you could save the life of someone else by cheating...or your wife could, would you allow it to happen? After all, her pussy is no longer broken. It's still RIGHT THERE!
Does he accept that this is just a part of her personality?
Will she want to 'save more of the world' in exactly the same way?
And really, njlaruen and green something really nailed it. Her WHY and rationalizations are CRITICAL to HIS decision...and we do not have them!
Will I excoriate this story? Hell no. I would suggest that the gleeful attitude of 'figure it our yourself' is very similar to an unrepentant Ashley of 'get over it'. I could have enjoyed the cliff hanger a bit easier if you hadn't stood on the edge and scoffed at me hanging there, nay, had not put me there in the first place.
And who know? Since you gave me tacit permission, I might take you up on that challenge. Or not.
I knew what would happen by the time she was off in another place working on the problem. I would have solved it by telling her to hold on during that first telephone call, that I would be right over. On the other hand her husband was slow on the draw. But I would have told her that I saw her cheating and wanted out... because I could never trust her again. Tell her to figure how to it without getting everyone in the family upset.
If she starts playing hard ball then you have no choice...
"'Don't like my ending? Make your own!"'- That's the author's responsibility, not the reader's. Had there been a proper ending, this would have been a good story.
Sugna has a good point in his comment. If Sweetie had gone to Australia, it would have been a different problem, but Sweetie is less than 3 hours away. However, Sweetie may not evaluate her marital conditions when stymied by a tough snag ... especially since she cleared such circumstances before accepting Future Hubby as a boyfriend!
Early on, Sweetie asked Future Hubby if he could handle WEIRD and he was very prompt in reviewing the pluses (which eventually included being the ONLY person in the world who has the brains, training and inclination to SAVE his brother's LIFE!) and the minuses! His clear and enthusiastic answer was "YES, I can handle WEIRD!" (which, he ALSO discovers, includes Sweetie's delightful manner of breaking through mental barriers!). And ... that manner is as impersonal as boffing can get without wearing a diver's helmet and a wetsuit!
So! He has to get down on his knees and thank Sweetie for saving Tom's life and thank her 'ASSistant' for helping Sweetie accomplish that whenever necessary - with less delay than Hubby would have needed to get there each time Sweetie hit a snag! Then reassure Sweetie that he could not imagine having married any better than he did, and eagerly awaits starting a family with her!
What Sweetie needed is NOT as weird as the multitude of situations any LW reader could generate in a few seconds! And Hubby promised he could handle WEIRD. Cannot believe so many LW readers want Hubby to break his PROMISE, remembering again that he himself had helped her out that way repeatedly before they tied the knot!
Further, if he insists on divorce - breaking his promise to his wife ... consider family reunions where everyone shuns Former Hubby for rejecting the woman BECAUSE she saved their beloved Tom (Son, Father, Husband, Nephew, Uncle, Cousin, etc.!)
Well crafted and like life things can get sloppy in the end. Can’t imagine why people who are so into the BTB keep reading things like this and then getting upset by them.
The greater good was misunderstood.
It wasn't Ashley that was acting for the greater good, it was Kurt.
He didn't throw Ashley out of his life for cheating while she was saving his brother's life.
Three hours or less away, he could have said he had a family emergency if he needed to leave work early even.
There is, at least in this story (not in amyyums) plenty of room to state that ASHLEY is also 'taking one for the team' for the greater good. We do not know her motivation...except that everyone at that clinic seems dedicated in enormous ways. That scientist was practically begging Kurt to not do anything!
So Kurt gets to decide about the greater good. Alas, Ashley already made her choice. We know what happened. We don't know why.
I think the LW hub restricts the authors' fantasy. An imagined Marriage Strife hub can oblidge the authors to write the future of the married pair. The brother heals up from his illness and how the husband heals up from the discovered betrayal? Everything sleeps in the future...............
If she really needed the "help", the next breakthrough could wait 3 hours until he got there. She didn't even try to include him. That was sneaky dishonest treacherous and selfish. Only when it was over and she had all the strange cock she "needed" was she going to say anything.
In deference to saving his brother's life, make the divorce fair.
This was off to a great start. You created engaging, quirky, likeable characters, and put them into a situation that presents intriguing, complex, and emotionally-charged issues. Then you denied your protagonists any opportunity to grapple with those issues together, and withheld information that would allow us to predict how they might do so. A few examples:
How did Ashley get her, um, creativity scratched before she met Kurt? Random guys? A stable of studs? Stick with one as long as he got the job done?
When Kurt sees Ashley getting fucked at RCA, why doesn't he just push Chad out of the way and take over? Why doesn't Dr. Paxton suggest that? After all, if it's really all about the sex, surely Kurt can provide it at least as well as Chad. Or does Chad's creativity need scratching, too?
After the cure is found, while Ashley is still at RCA but there are no more roadblocks to get past, do she and Chad fuck again? Either way, how does she feel about that?
"Give us the tools and we will finish the job." -- W.L.S. Churchill.
Now that the medical trial is over, and the brother saved, time to cut her loose. She cheated by using her lover to help her think. Now since you used her to cure the brother, divorce the cunt.
English
HEH! HEH! HEH!
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Where's the rest?
There is more I presume?
Ending?
In most stories the ending is a wrap up or at best a conclusion. In this case the author just got tired of the story and sadly just quit writing, but then justified it by challenging the reader to write their own ending. Wow! How pretentious..... I really don't like to bust the authors chops, but sometimes the situation beg me to....
Ending?
Good story but weak ending.... Buy her a dildo, cheating is cheating
150 Miles
She was less than 3 hours away, better to have demanded that her husband come fuck her than to cheat on him. Whatever the excuse, it will be lame.
fuck
if I wanted to write my own endings I wouldn't come here reading other people's stories... 1*
DIFFERENT INCENTIVES FOR DIFFERENT FOLKS
but the gravy still gets lumpy. TK U MLJ LV NV
Good Story
But there was no ending! Your a good writer and this seemed like you either got stuck for an ending and quit or or just got tired of the story.
Three stars and thanks for your effort.
Disappointed & Feeling Cheated
I think that you should have provided an ending rather do the "cop out" that you did. The story was so good however, that I still gave it 5 stars.
I knew something was up when a author who usually gets over 4 stars for a story submission score at 2.85 (when I first clicked on the story).
Bill1104
While I read the story I thought...
While I read the story I though: "This is for sure a 4* story!!". Well written, well-developed, waiting for the writers choice about his decision...Then the writer let's us in the dark...And he forgot something: Sure the genius needed a fuck to clear the mind, but the big question is: "Wouldn't her cheating create remorse in her mind that would conflict with her logic"? I think it would, looking at her uneasyness when she was with him...A remorse mind can't work as needed...That's why the writer would have end the story is own way...He was the one to put the "hero" between a fire and an abyss...And as some reader said 150 miles wasn't so far away that she couldn't call him in urgency...
Incomplete
If my kids don't finish their homework they get an F. If a writer on Lit doesn't finish the story they get 1 star. Its to be expected.
Concur
I concur with most of the previous comments, I think it is better, as some writers do in the prologue, invite others to write an ending. I find it difficult to mark this story because it is not finished. I like stories from this writer and hopefully he will relent and write the ending. She will no doubt justify her actions in the name of science and for any action there can be found a justifiable reason, but of course that does not make it right. My own view is she cheated so "on yer bike dear" end of.
a very good start
to bad it wasnt finished. if you do finish it, then maybe it will get a better score. that said, divorce her. plus let chad's wife know what was going on also. if you dont divorce her every time she is working and you arent there she will be fucking someone else.
You are right
Your ending sucked. It is not finished.
What ending......
a total waste of time. writing is good but, what ending?
The others are correct
I agree with almost everyone. As good as 9/10's of the writing was and how well the story flowed, and how often I am impressed with imhapless's writings, this ending rated a 0, well a 1. It appears that imhapless did not know how to end the situation. It is the writer's imagination that makes the story work and this ending failed. Most challenges from a writer are to make an alternative ending. This story lacked an ending with which to make an alternative.
Amazing
One of the best stories ever on Lit and people are carping because there's no good solution? Geez.
Not Done, Please Continue
Very good story.
Now please tell me more about wife's thoughts. For major crimes, intent is an important component to determine guilt. Murder and manslaughter have a victim. The punishment should fit the crime intended.
Unfinished
I liked the concept and the writing but rated it at only 3 stars due to the lack of an ending.
FIGURE OUT THE GREATEST GOOD
it should be YOU. tk u mlj lv nv
you know ive been thinking about this
at work. and something has been bothering me. even if she did what she did for the best of reasons how can he stay married to her. the whole place where she worked knew what was going on. did they try to stop it or let him know.no in fact they actively tried to hide it when he got there. how can he trust either her or any one else that she works with in the future. all the male DR. that she works with will know that she has no problem fucking around so what do you think they are gonna do. also im disappointed that one of my favorite authors on here would write this story. this story is no different than the other 100's that will twist reality around to make it ok for the husband to accept his wife cheating.she cheated to save my job, she cheated to save our kids. she cheated so save our house. she cheated save her job. she cheated to save the country. now she cheated to cure cancer. all total bullshit.
You just got lazy and decided to post it before it was finished.... That doesn't make you creative; it makes you a dick
Piling On
For someone who is as good a writer as imhapless, this story was a disappointment for its failure to end (as mentioned by others more than once). A good/great writer has skill and imhaplass has it in spades. But a good/great writer also has something others including myself do not have: a certain kind of literary imagination. This story was, until the end, outstanding in that it created a new LW dilemma for the protagonist Kurt and for us readers. But the ending sank like an overweight anchor. It feels like a cop-out. Is it possible that imhapless couldn't figure out an ending? Or is he playing a game? Unlike most other Literotica writers, I would like to hear from imhapless about his justification for ending "For the Greater Good" like he did.
The LW's mistake and not only of the authors!
Unfortunatally the Loving Wives hub does wrong effect to the authors. If a Marriage Strife hub was the authors could get big inniciative more and more story would get longer part and we readers could know the future of the couples or ex spouses.
Ugh. 5* Story
but there's something in this that acted as a trigger for me.
I hope other people come forward with their own endings.
But no BTB, please s that would be out of character for the proponent of the story.
Okay story
But the lack of ending is chickenshit and hackneyed,to say the least,The Lady or the Tiger always drove me nuts when I had to read it. If the author invited someone else to finish it,I could see it, but this is just irritating.
As far as the dilemma, it is no different if a wife or husband cheated to get ahead at work or for other 'good' reasons.As someone pointed out,if she needed to get laid she could have driven home the three hours,then returned,or had him come there or maybe talked to him about it,see if the cost of helping the brother was worth it,rather than cheating.Among other things,if she could do this so coldly,without guilt, how could he ever trust her,no matter how pure the intent might have been,the ends don"t justify the means always. Genius might excuse some things,but like a Steve Jobs no matter what he accomplished,he still was a complete dick,caught up in his own ego so much he often forgot his humanity,she was much the same. It almost kind of seems that to her,like Jobs,people are there to be used,and when human feelings come in the way,they are meaningless.
Interesting story.
I was intrigued by the main characters, in particular the female lead.
I've met a few people kinda like that - a result of a misspent youth surrounded by geeks. The "sex is a bodily function" business isn't that rare... but it isn't as charming as the author tries to make it.
The solution to the dilemma is not visible, because it depends on the female leads' justification. The justification may be very good, or it may expose the difference in attitudes and expectations of the leads in the story as to their relationship. What the justification >is< defines what is really happening in the story.
So... yeah, I suppose I could make a stab, but frankly asking the readership to imagine the inner motivations of a stinkin' genius seems to me to be the wrong decision.
Green-something
(starting such speculation is not totally useless - but how are we to have any idea if we are even close?)
Not Difficult
If we accept the silly premise the way forward is pretty simple. She makes a clean breast of it. He tells her of his pain and says never again. She accepts with appropriate contrition or he walks. Problem solved.
Great Read*****
Something original and very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.
Jpb
Speaking of good ole bob what happened to him I have t seen a new story in like a year... And hapless buddy there is no ending here but to finish it off for u he tells her he knows how she gets through her problems when she's stuck, kicks her ass out and since she earns more n all gets half of her shit
I think njlauren said it well. I chose to read this knowing it was likely to lead to reconciliation if not full blown cucking. It was posted by a writer that writes well but chooses subjects I rarely agree with. You asked people to finish it if they didn't like yours. Excuse me, what finish are you talking about? You created a scenario and left it hanging. If this was some grand scheme of starting something and allowing others to finish as they see fit then say that up front. Cheap and cowardly is how I'd term your decision. Because of that, not the adultery, I will rate this lower than I would have otherwise.
P.S.: I wonder if Dr. Paxton would have as easily allowed HIS own wife to do whatever it takes to find the cure. Turning a blind eye to their behavior and begging for hubby nit to interfere probably upset me as much as anything else you wrote...probably because it is, UNFORTUNATELY, the most believable part of the tale.
It's still the same old story...
...people doing evil because "the end justifies the means." Unfortunately, the means used ALWAYS pervert the desired goal. Decent story but extremely lame ending. Perhaps not your best work, but thank you for sharing it with us. I look forward to your next submission.
I was barrelling through this story
And about the time she had to move out of town, I actually stopped reading and said to myself 'this is a delight to read'. Good pacing. Interesting characters. A unique situation.
And it raises interesting questions: What does he owe the woman who saved his brother's life? Would you, dear commenter, if through some contrived scenario, if you could save the life of someone else by cheating...or your wife could, would you allow it to happen? After all, her pussy is no longer broken. It's still RIGHT THERE!
Does he accept that this is just a part of her personality?
Will she want to 'save more of the world' in exactly the same way?
And really, njlaruen and green something really nailed it. Her WHY and rationalizations are CRITICAL to HIS decision...and we do not have them!
Will I excoriate this story? Hell no. I would suggest that the gleeful attitude of 'figure it our yourself' is very similar to an unrepentant Ashley of 'get over it'. I could have enjoyed the cliff hanger a bit easier if you hadn't stood on the edge and scoffed at me hanging there, nay, had not put me there in the first place.
And who know? Since you gave me tacit permission, I might take you up on that challenge. Or not.
Excellent Story
I knew what would happen by the time she was off in another place working on the problem. I would have solved it by telling her to hold on during that first telephone call, that I would be right over. On the other hand her husband was slow on the draw. But I would have told her that I saw her cheating and wanted out... because I could never trust her again. Tell her to figure how to it without getting everyone in the family upset.
If she starts playing hard ball then you have no choice...
Honey I'm pregnant
How will that be the greater good
All Stories Need an Ending
"'Don't like my ending? Make your own!"'- That's the author's responsibility, not the reader's. Had there been a proper ending, this would have been a good story.
If we could finish these stories
We'd be writing them rather than just reading them.
The brother is saved
Shoot the wife! Death is vastly underestimated as a solution. Just joking
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!
Is that it? FTDS. No conclusion. Not good.
The ENDING is in PLAIN sight in the story.
Sugna has a good point in his comment. If Sweetie had gone to Australia, it would have been a different problem, but Sweetie is less than 3 hours away. However, Sweetie may not evaluate her marital conditions when stymied by a tough snag ... especially since she cleared such circumstances before accepting Future Hubby as a boyfriend!
Early on, Sweetie asked Future Hubby if he could handle WEIRD and he was very prompt in reviewing the pluses (which eventually included being the ONLY person in the world who has the brains, training and inclination to SAVE his brother's LIFE!) and the minuses! His clear and enthusiastic answer was "YES, I can handle WEIRD!" (which, he ALSO discovers, includes Sweetie's delightful manner of breaking through mental barriers!). And ... that manner is as impersonal as boffing can get without wearing a diver's helmet and a wetsuit!
So! He has to get down on his knees and thank Sweetie for saving Tom's life and thank her 'ASSistant' for helping Sweetie accomplish that whenever necessary - with less delay than Hubby would have needed to get there each time Sweetie hit a snag! Then reassure Sweetie that he could not imagine having married any better than he did, and eagerly awaits starting a family with her!
What Sweetie needed is NOT as weird as the multitude of situations any LW reader could generate in a few seconds! And Hubby promised he could handle WEIRD. Cannot believe so many LW readers want Hubby to break his PROMISE, remembering again that he himself had helped her out that way repeatedly before they tied the knot!
Further, if he insists on divorce - breaking his promise to his wife ... consider family reunions where everyone shuns Former Hubby for rejecting the woman BECAUSE she saved their beloved Tom (Son, Father, Husband, Nephew, Uncle, Cousin, etc.!)
5*
Interesting premise
However, your statement at the end implies that this story has an ending. It does not.
Good story, stupid comments.
Well crafted and like life things can get sloppy in the end. Can’t imagine why people who are so into the BTB keep reading things like this and then getting upset by them.
greater good
The greater good was misunderstood.
It wasn't Ashley that was acting for the greater good, it was Kurt.
He didn't throw Ashley out of his life for cheating while she was saving his brother's life.
Three hours or less away, he could have said he had a family emergency if he needed to leave work early even.
I disagree a bit
There is, at least in this story (not in amyyums) plenty of room to state that ASHLEY is also 'taking one for the team' for the greater good. We do not know her motivation...except that everyone at that clinic seems dedicated in enormous ways. That scientist was practically begging Kurt to not do anything!
So Kurt gets to decide about the greater good. Alas, Ashley already made her choice. We know what happened. We don't know why.
imhapless didn't tell us
Time bomb
I think the LW hub restricts the authors' fantasy. An imagined Marriage Strife hub can oblidge the authors to write the future of the married pair. The brother heals up from his illness and how the husband heals up from the discovered betrayal? Everything sleeps in the future...............
Didn't like the ending? What ending.
Twocrows nailed it.
If she really needed the "help", the next breakthrough could wait 3 hours until he got there. She didn't even try to include him. That was sneaky dishonest treacherous and selfish. Only when it was over and she had all the strange cock she "needed" was she going to say anything.
In deference to saving his brother's life, make the divorce fair.
That is the end.
Is half a story better than none?
This was off to a great start. You created engaging, quirky, likeable characters, and put them into a situation that presents intriguing, complex, and emotionally-charged issues. Then you denied your protagonists any opportunity to grapple with those issues together, and withheld information that would allow us to predict how they might do so. A few examples:
How did Ashley get her, um, creativity scratched before she met Kurt? Random guys? A stable of studs? Stick with one as long as he got the job done?
When Kurt sees Ashley getting fucked at RCA, why doesn't he just push Chad out of the way and take over? Why doesn't Dr. Paxton suggest that? After all, if it's really all about the sex, surely Kurt can provide it at least as well as Chad. Or does Chad's creativity need scratching, too?
After the cure is found, while Ashley is still at RCA but there are no more roadblocks to get past, do she and Chad fuck again? Either way, how does she feel about that?
"Give us the tools and we will finish the job." -- W.L.S. Churchill.
Nice shot, man
Can't say much for the follow through. The game film got frozen, there. Good job.
Don't Like the Ending?
WHAT ending? There IS no ending!
I'm sorry, I know they love each other, and it will be painful, but they're done!
As someone else said, the first time she hit a roadblock she should have called him!
Or did she WANT to fuck Chad?
Damn
Now that the medical trial is over, and the brother saved, time to cut her loose. She cheated by using her lover to help her think. Now since you used her to cure the brother, divorce the cunt.
Just my asshole opinion.
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