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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/10/15

Happily married...

But fucking around. Right.

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by impo_6110/10/15

Being a fantasy....

If this was another story about cheating, it wouldn't deserve more than 1*...But being a fantasy, as said in the beginning, it's very different and is a good reading...3*

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by Twentyseven10/10/15

A Suggestion

She might have shaken her head imperceptibly but certainly not unperceptively. She knew exactly what she was doing.

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by Anonymous10/10/15

sorry cheaters are cheaters, nothing more, nothing less

wife needs to divorce his ass

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by Anonymous10/10/15

An okay start, but WAY too short.

Much, much more information and buildup would have been nice. And the sex was pathetic. Just didn't feel like a one time coupling and the descriptive passages didn't exactly set the world on fire. More about the fallout and the divorces would have been good. Overall, just too short to be a good read.

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by Anonymous10/11/15

Ok ummmm ....

Read your first paragraph again.

If your not a married woman yourself how can you be in love with another married woman?

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by Lickideesplit10/12/15

Sucky Seduction

A married woman stops by to borrow a book. Then she indicates she wants his body. Masterful writing? Nope. We never know why ... we DO know they liked it and each other ... but also, that it as a 'one & done!' We don't know WHY (about that, or really, why anything else!)

3* and generous ... altho pretty well constructed.

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by Anonymous10/12/15

You Should

You should have finished the concept of a fantasy by ending the story with a reference to his wondering if Jenny thinks about him in a sexual way or how his wife might react if he consummated his fantasy, etc.

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by Anonymous10/13/15

Shallow empty plot, like your charaters.

No drama, suspense, intrigue, just fucking. Kind of mediocre.

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by chytown10/15/15

Good Read****

Thanks for sharing. That was a neat fantasy!!

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