As soon as she said she wanted to be fucked in the arse I was ready to give up as the story seemed to have lost any credibility it may have had. However, once the reason became obvious then the story became worth reading again. Normally I dislike gay stories intensely but this is........ well, different.
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Anonymous10/10/15
Very nice story ...... I think they both should explore her body more and Yes, he should suck her cock so she really knows he loves her as she is. I hope you write more and that they become very sexually active. Thanks.
This one was something special in this segment of LT. You don't come across lots of TG suff of this quality either. Somehow you managed to capture a great love story with a neat twist and did it in a short tale. I do hope you expand these two a bit more in the future as this has great potential, both for bodily pleasure as well as psychologically.
A great story well deserved of the 5*.
Hope to see more of this and your other stories!
This was really good but far too short, it's begging for more.
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Anonymous10/11/15
Great story
I really enjoyed reading it. It is exactly what I've been looking for and it is great to find someone who can write something I truly enjoy. Hope to see more from you.
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Anonymous10/12/15
3
Surprise!
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Anonymous10/12/15
hmm
She isn't transgender, The technical term is Hermaphrodite "a person or animal having both male and female sex organs or other sexual characteristics, either abnormally or (in the case of some organisms) as the natural condition. "
Hermaphrodites are extremely rare, but they do happen..
Dictionary.com defines transgender as: noting or relating to a person whose gender identity does not correspond to that person’s biological sex assigned at birth: the transgender movement; transgender rights. Maybe I did not make it clear enough, but intention was to imply that she chose to undergo hormone replacement therapy at an early age. I understand that I did not explicitly say that but I did provide subtle hints. Katy does not have the genitalia of both a male and a female (although that would be kind of interesting, new idea for a story?). Thank you for pointing this out to me though, I will remember to address this in any sequels if I choose to write them.
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Anonymous10/13/15
Awesome
That was great! Please continue this as a series!!!
Keep up the hard work !
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Anonymous10/14/15
More! More! More!
That was really hot! I shot a load at "Instead of my fingers plunging deep into a soaking wet vagina, my hand closed around a two inch long flaccid penis". I hope you expand the story.
You really to expand on this. Does she have both sex organs or only one ? Is 'she' a girl or a boy ? What ?
Please do write more, you've made a good start and I'd really like to you take this further.
English
Please continue
Liked it. Wish it was a bit longer.
Refreshingly different.
As soon as she said she wanted to be fucked in the arse I was ready to give up as the story seemed to have lost any credibility it may have had. However, once the reason became obvious then the story became worth reading again. Normally I dislike gay stories intensely but this is........ well, different.
Very nice story ...... I think they both should explore her body more and Yes, he should suck her cock so she really knows he loves her as she is. I hope you write more and that they become very sexually active. Thanks.
A very pleasant surprise
This one was something special in this segment of LT. You don't come across lots of TG suff of this quality either. Somehow you managed to capture a great love story with a neat twist and did it in a short tale. I do hope you expand these two a bit more in the future as this has great potential, both for bodily pleasure as well as psychologically.
A great story well deserved of the 5*.
Hope to see more of this and your other stories!
I really hope you continue
This was really good but far too short, it's begging for more.
Great story
I really enjoyed reading it. It is exactly what I've been looking for and it is great to find someone who can write something I truly enjoy. Hope to see more from you.
3
Surprise!
hmm
She isn't transgender, The technical term is Hermaphrodite "a person or animal having both male and female sex organs or other sexual characteristics, either abnormally or (in the case of some organisms) as the natural condition. "
Hermaphrodites are extremely rare, but they do happen..
Good story, well written, would like more..
For the anon that called Katy a hermaphrodite:
Dictionary.com defines transgender as: noting or relating to a person whose gender identity does not correspond to that person’s biological sex assigned at birth: the transgender movement; transgender rights. Maybe I did not make it clear enough, but intention was to imply that she chose to undergo hormone replacement therapy at an early age. I understand that I did not explicitly say that but I did provide subtle hints. Katy does not have the genitalia of both a male and a female (although that would be kind of interesting, new idea for a story?). Thank you for pointing this out to me though, I will remember to address this in any sequels if I choose to write them.
Awesome
That was great! Please continue this as a series!!!
Keep up the hard work !
More! More! More!
That was really hot! I shot a load at "Instead of my fingers plunging deep into a soaking wet vagina, my hand closed around a two inch long flaccid penis". I hope you expand the story.
Different certainly !
You really to expand on this. Does she have both sex organs or only one ? Is 'she' a girl or a boy ? What ?
Please do write more, you've made a good start and I'd really like to you take this further.
A very good start !
Wow
Biggest plot twist I have ever witnessed
You have just got to write more !
This far too good a story to only last one chapter.
You really must write at least one more.
Please don't leave it for too long.
Thanks !
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