I want you to write a PS or a Chap 2 to this story. It moved quickly, but you got excellent detail in a one-page romp. Very nice detail. Left me treading my own water. Practically wore down my index and middle fingers on my clit. Well, get going! Very happy you made me.
by
Anonymous11/05/15
WELL DONE
I've enjoyed your quick read story. The quality of your work warrants response to it. Motivation was clear and not looking to give up her life and love of family works well. You have left readers who enjoyed this piece wondering about a second and even additional chapters beyond that.
If you do continue, can the build up and culmination take longer to read?
English
Liked that
I want you to write a PS or a Chap 2 to this story. It moved quickly, but you got excellent detail in a one-page romp. Very nice detail. Left me treading my own water. Practically wore down my index and middle fingers on my clit. Well, get going! Very happy you made me.
WELL DONE
I've enjoyed your quick read story. The quality of your work warrants response to it. Motivation was clear and not looking to give up her life and love of family works well. You have left readers who enjoyed this piece wondering about a second and even additional chapters beyond that.
If you do continue, can the build up and culmination take longer to read?
5 Star
Nice first Story
Very nice sexy story, looking forward to the next one.
This is good, very good. Please continue (thank you)
Click here to leave your own comment on this submission! or
Back to Personal Ad or
More submissions by Insatiable_Little_Devil_2003.