Enjoyed the detail and dialog. Keep writing.
Nice story, well thought out but way too many words out of context and spelled wrong. Stumbling around word problems takes away some of the reading pleasure... Keep it up!
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Very nice
Enjoyed the detail and dialog. Keep writing.
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Nice story, well thought out but way too many words out of context and spelled wrong. Stumbling around word problems takes away some of the reading pleasure... Keep it up!
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