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Well Damn!!!!
Shoulda mention the wife. Will there be a continuation?
Many errors...
Seems like you depended on auto fill.
"driving him inside" - did you mean "insane"?
"She visibly shuttered" - shutters are on the windows of a house, if a person shakes they shudder
These are just the two most glaring errors, there are others.
3 words....
Ed. It. Or. You desperately need an editor. You lost me with the wife intro.
Just a few more errors to go with the others mentioned and by no means points them all out. You really need to edit or get someone to do it.
"No but... I'm around..." She preserved."
She preserved her words? Look up the definition of preserved! You meant persevered.
"he great grasped her ass"
Great grasped? Did you even read this again before submitting?
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