by nevets13
Hi I'm really enjoying this story and would love to see how it devolpes.
She's a real hot one in bed and like she said a lady out of the bedroom and a slut in the bedroom and she's all that and lot's more. I hope that you will continue this story and develop it more and lets see where it leads to.
5 stars
Love how you developed this story. Looking forward to how far this relationship goes and with whom! So many possibilities.
These 2 are great together, you are a marvellous story teller. ;)
Excellent ending for these two, now we need him to recap with sister and see where that leads.
I'm surprised you seem to have stopped at this point. There was so much room to go on, with further adventures. Filling her up, eating her creampie and being even more adventurous lovers. A woman like this has a lot to give and it would be so much fun to read it the way you write. Really it's just beginning for those two, yet you choose to end the story. Alas. Maybe you could pick it up again with her sitting on his chin.
So well written and now an ending - should not be! Please - more!
A resolution is needed for his relationship w/Donna and you implied more between he and his sister.
I liked the story very much
...nothing unexpected - par for most of lit, unfortunately. one star.
Older women are a favorite topic /fantasy /fetish of mine. So are creampies, which we haven't had in this series. I really think, after going without for so long, it's only right that the lady should be filled to overflowing a few times.
Very nice. Slow and respectful, more like reality. Please write another chapter or 2