All Comments on 'In Pursuit of Mrs Kramer Ch. 03'

by nevets13

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More please

Hi I'm really enjoying this story and would love to see how it devolpes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
PURSUIT

GREAT, WHAT MORE CAN BE SAID, BUT, GREAT

john22307john22307over 8 years ago
MORE

You can take this a lot further and I hope you do.

biphilmassbiphilmassover 8 years ago
WOW !!!!!

She's a real hot one in bed and like she said a lady out of the bedroom and a slut in the bedroom and she's all that and lot's more. I hope that you will continue this story and develop it more and lets see where it leads to.

5 stars

w8ingnoww8ingnowover 8 years ago
Excellent

Love how you developed this story. Looking forward to how far this relationship goes and with whom! So many possibilities.

fantasiahottiefantasiahottieover 8 years ago
Keep going!!!

These 2 are great together, you are a marvellous story teller. ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
More chapers

Go for it and write some more

J_RReaderJ_RReaderalmost 8 years ago
Good

I enjoyed reading, I think there should be Mode.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
great!

This is your best work! Please keep it going!

LarmindyLarmindyover 7 years ago
Well done

Excellent ending for these two, now we need him to recap with sister and see where that leads.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Wonderful story, well told

I'm surprised you seem to have stopped at this point. There was so much room to go on, with further adventures. Filling her up, eating her creampie and being even more adventurous lovers. A woman like this has a lot to give and it would be so much fun to read it the way you write. Really it's just beginning for those two, yet you choose to end the story. Alas. Maybe you could pick it up again with her sitting on his chin.

Firmhands5Firmhands5almost 7 years ago
What a release

So well written and now an ending - should not be! Please - more!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Needs two story lines fleshed out

A resolution is needed for his relationship w/Donna and you implied more between he and his sister.

I liked the story very much

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
pretty formulaic...

...nothing unexpected - par for most of lit, unfortunately. one star.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
More, please

Older women are a favorite topic /fantasy /fetish of mine. So are creampies, which we haven't had in this series. I really think, after going without for so long, it's only right that the lady should be filled to overflowing a few times.

HragsHragsover 3 years ago
Mmmmmmm ..love it

Hope u continue this sexy story !!!!

mikon4004mikon4004over 2 years ago

More please. Develop the relationship

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very nice. Slow and respectful, more like reality. Please write another chapter or 2

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