Short, sweet, energetic, full of passion and with a happy ending for a couple in love. Just what I like to see.
I'm always disappointed when a story with a lot of potential apparently hasn't been edited or proofread. Lots of typos, lots of homonyms.
Short hot story..
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Straight to the pint
Short, sweet, energetic, full of passion and with a happy ending for a couple in love.
Just what I like to see.
A LITTLE DISAPPOINTING
I'm always disappointed when a story with a lot of potential apparently hasn't been edited or proofread. Lots of typos, lots of homonyms.
Short and Hot :-)
Short hot story..
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