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Six Weeks of Grace Pt. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Seemore1510/13/15

Great story!!!

Love reading each chapter can't wait for next chapter waiting in earnest

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by Anonymous10/13/15

This is getting boring and whats with the cliff hangers? ASSHOLE is one word and you need to learn the difference between YOUR and YOU'RE.

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by jetpacksam10/13/15

YAAAARGH!

I stopped watching Soap Operas because it was a terrible addiction..
JUST WHEN I THINK I'M OUT, WRITE4FOOD PULLS ME BACK IN!

I am trying not to read anything into the way you sequenced your tags, but judging from how carefully you are constructing this tale.....

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by Anonymous10/13/15

Keep the chapters coming!

I'm loving how you end with a cliff-hanger! Makes me wish for the next chapter to see what it is all about. Please continue ... ignore the negative comments ... I'm not a writer, I'm a reader and I like what I'm reading. Thanks.

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by kjohns200110/13/15

Great story...but for a lawyer she is really dumb.

I love this story, but I just don't see how a lawyer could be so blind that she wouldn't see that something was going on. I would think that it would also be stupid of the judge not to have wondered why the law firm was so adamant about the case and at least have taken a look into their interest in the case. I know, it's all necessary for the story, but still, somewhere along the line someone has to show some common sense and start looking at the law firm and putting two and two together. I'm looking forward to more about these characters and their lives and can't wait for the next installment.

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by Anonymous10/13/15

Love it, can't wait for the next chapter!

I like the cliff hangers, makes it fun. Could use an editor but its such a great story and I am getting drawn in more every day!

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by biphilmass10/13/15

Don't let the negative comments get you

I love your writing and the development of the characters is great with both Don and Anne as flawed human beings and the love that Grace has for them both. I hope the senior partners do not realize the mistake they made going after Don because he has something to fight for and the sooner that he and Anne admit their feelings toward each other and toward Grace the deeper and stronger their love and bonds will be.
5 Stars.

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by Chief3Blanket10/13/15

This story

So far so good. I don't usually comment chapter by chapter, but wait to the end of the entire story.

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by rightbank10/13/15

I hate to point out the obvious

but, isn't about time to bring Bobby in for a family conference, and then have a meeting with the Judge?

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by Elithal10/13/15

Nice!

You're kicking butt in story, romance and suspense. Very well done.

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by Socially_Inept10/13/15

Okay

Now it seems Anne has might have found some link to what Brett has been up to. How many weeks has it been so far?

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by Anonymous10/13/15

Hurry please

I'm so addicted. You better finish this story!!

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by Horseman6807/18/16

One of Best Stories on the Site.

Chapter 5 and no sex, but readers are salivating over Don and Anne. What writing!

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