All Comments on 'River Ch. 02'

You seem to forget that you are reading this for free, by your lack of constructive criticism.

The chapters so far have been extremely well written and as you're suggesting this should not be in the Romance section, I'm not sure that are you used to reading romance (or the story so far). It often builds up slowly.

@Somesaylove - I'm intrigued by this story. I'm imagining that you are going to spend a while on these 4 women developing romantic stories for each of them and their different characteristics. I'm really enjoying it so far, and look forward to the rest.

Thanks for sharing.

but in the wrong category.

Now, that's a much better story, helping a shy kid and connecting, tugs at your heart strings and his dad may get lucky. 5 stars on this one