Proofreading your story would help. It contained comma splices and run-on sentences. Every sentence included errors in spelling and punctuation. It's distracting.
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Anonymous06/24/05
I Loved It!
I love it when the wife makes the ultimate sacrifice for her husband. Keep the sories cumming....
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Anonymous01/11/14
Sad
but when the dollars run out... and you want to maintain your style... a lot of things can go in and out of a couple's mind... Videos are better than robbing banks... But then again, if caught, you will know where you will sleep and what you will eat...
English
Dime a dozen
These wimp husband stories. One point.
Spelling, grammar
Proofreading your story would help. It contained comma splices and run-on sentences. Every sentence included errors in spelling and punctuation. It's distracting.
I Loved It!
I love it when the wife makes the ultimate sacrifice for her husband. Keep the sories cumming....
Sad
but when the dollars run out... and you want to maintain your style... a lot of things can go in and out of a couple's mind... Videos are better than robbing banks... But then again, if caught, you will know where you will sleep and what you will eat...
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