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by Anonymous10/16/15

MORE!!!

Need the rest of the story.Good build up.

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by Anonymous10/16/15

Great story

I look forward to reading your next posting

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by Anonymous10/16/15

Good Potential

I'm looking forward to you building on this base

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by Anonymous10/16/15

Very nice

I really liked your story, the sensitive way you described Tim's feelings, his growing awareness of Nurah, and his concern about being a gentleman and showing the proper respect. You're painting an interesting picture of two realistic, likable characters.

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by Anonymous10/18/15

very sweet story

Good character build-up - can't wait for the entire book! :)

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by Anonymous10/18/15

Can't wait for more...

I honestly enjoyed reading this...loved the build up and am anticipating the rest of the story ;)

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by Anonymous10/18/15

Great story!

Can't wait for the next chapter.

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by Anonymous10/23/15

Excellent

A good cross cultural interaction

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