All Comments on 'Houseguest Nightmare'

Good story, but you need a continuity editor. All of these other people just started showing up randomly with no explanation, it was hard to follow.

But pretty entertaining. Needs some editing help. And I'm not sure about the Humor section. Maybe erotic couplings? Maybe the "Big dick/dumb ass" section? Amyway. Thanks for the effort. It was funny.

and let's have it be his wife who is servicing all his brothers, and his father. How much fun is that story?

Thought so.

I have sex with hanna and her four sisters all the time!!!!!

Great job!

for any budding writers I hope they pay attention. Your use of foreshadowing contributes greatly to the story. One had to expect the switch between Josie and Claire. That also set up Carol nicely but I found that a bit anti-climatic. I might have approached it a little differently, but it's your story.

Probably not reality, but still funny.

Could any guy really get that lucky? Oh well, dream on.

@anonymous with the changed roles.

As long everyone is on board I wouldn't hate such a story. As long nobody is humiliated or hurt, reveresed roles would be ok. But in a lot of stories here a man fucking someone others wife changes to an asshole to make himself a better lover.

I had once a threesome with a married couple. At no time I thought of making bad comments. I was feeling honored at all time and was never thinking bad about any of the two.

That's one fantasy I now have... :) *****