All Comments on 'Movie Night'

It was alright but I believe this still needs some work think a little more outside the bluff.

The part that's here is quite good.

But this story could be so much more.

I almost never give middle of the road scores, if a story doesn't move me then why bother to vote, sometimes the "move" is to anger at the contempt the writer showed by posting such garbage so then a 1*, sometimes a 5* to encourage the writer to do more good writing.

But this story I rated a 4*, as almost but not quite.

I thought it was fine the way it is: short, contained, no unneeded back story. We don't really need to know more than this. Congrats on the century of pleasure, you lucky bastard!

This one was VERY entertaining, and has a story that I would love to see expanded.