Missing Her Fiercely

Reunited?

Please let there be a part 2 where they reunite

held the ballance

It's incredibly hard to walk the line between erotic and sweet without sliding into melodrama. This story pulls it off masterfully. It made me want to both touch myself and go make love with my partner of 17 years. Very well done.

Wow

This the most incredible work of erotic literature that I've ever read. The way you describe what's going on in an authentic way is so beautiful. I think there should definitely be a second part where they get together. Thanks for writing this.:)

One of the best.

One of the best.

Accomplished piece of work

The imagery cascaded out. This was jam-packed for a short piece. Dont know why people want a sequel. Theres enough here to satisfy. BTW I liked your website - very pro. Do you plan to write anything else than erotica? Scads of potential judging by this effort.

OHMYGODYES

Please keep writing. Ive been waiting for something like this for way too long

Every once in awhile something on this site floors me. This story just did. I don't even know what else to say - it makes me sad in a sense because I wish I had that beautiful connection with someone. And it makes me happy to hear about love so deep. so Just thank you!

I'm off...

... to find your website.

And to find everything else you've written, and devour it.

Oh my...

Such beauty... I love this so much, I crave mine. My wife; ...
I love your writing. More please.

Simply Amazing! This is poetry. Writing like this is a beautiful art.

The very best that I have ever read. Anywhere.

( And THAT is saying a lot!)

Stunning

This is simply amazing: unique, moving and poetic. You have a rare gift in your writing.

Extraordinary

This is beautiful and it's very poetic.

Gay Kat.

This was my first time reading something like this..

It was amazing I really enjoyed, thank you

Rare

This is a rare and first-rate example of an erotic word-portrait. My congratulations.

Marvellous construct

Incredibly evocative of a truly wondrous relationship, a tour de force. Congratulations on what is one of the most erotic vignettes I've ever read.

Another stellar effort

Just 1 page and you still found the words to knock it out of the park. A small little glimpse into the lives of the characters - a sample day when they are apart and it works perfectly to encapsulate their relationship. Once again, it's the little details that got to me rather than the sex.

Fantastic

You really can write!!!!!! Thanks for sharing, please keep on writing!!!!!

S