All Comments on 'Scratching An Itch Ch. 5'

I gave most chapters a 4 but the final chapter a 3 as I felt the ending was a little bit cheap and nasty - I mean - leaving them tied up like that? NOT cool. On the whole I found the story original enough to hold my interest but often badly written - full of typos - and occasional bad grammar. I liked it, and some of the description was quite thorough which of course is something I am still trying to learn in my own writing. I hate to repeat myself and sex can be repetitive and boring. Making each cunt-munch, ass-fuck or blow-job seem interesting to read can be a challenge...

I too have an itch that needs scratching. To tell you this was a quick and simple read would be a lie. I assumed the role of Ron and was quickly consumed by each and every act the occurred.

Ticklishsoles