Six Weeks of Grace Pt. 07

God damn it!

I hate cliff hangers. I'll go insane waiting for the next installment. I could really start to dislike the writer for teasing this way!!!

Good Cliff Hanger........

.....But your chapters are a little too short.

Having said that, I still ove this story.

Thank you for sharing your tale with us.

Brujay

Love this story!

I agree...wish chapters were longer...but keep them coming anyway!

I was enjoying this story, but like others in previous comments said, the chapters aren't long enough and it's getting boring with the constant cliff hangers, a good story doesn't need as cliff hanger on EVERY chapter, particularly when they're so short to start with.

5 Stars

Just as the previous chapters have bee, but have to concur that the short read's every day with the soap opera endings are getting tedious.

This is a great read so far

I would suggest you assemble them into on novella when you are finished.
I will be doing that, cannot wait to assemble these and read it straight through.

I feel like Don set the three guys up. I don't remember which chapter but when they had two guys following them in the park Don knew.

Thank you for your continued support!

I appreciate the comments on my story and I actually find the complaints of the short chapters flattering as everyone wants more! When I started this posting, I choose to do it in a daily serial format,10 parts, with a few cliff hangers. Some like it, some don't but as our tale is getting to the end, I will continue the theme. I will tease a bit - it gets exciting as hell from here!

Cannot wait till the end

Your doing a great job and I'm hoping in the bed all the lawyers are disbarred or worse in prison with people they helped put away.
Anne Don and Grace will be a great family and I think that this will be a great and happy story for all.
5 stars and keep up the great stuff !!!!!

Some thoughts.

There has been to much fantasyland logic and not enough reality logic. Bobby and Mike should have already have completed a preliminary check on the principles including Don and especially Grace. Why, because Bobby's job is to not trust anybody and Mike needs to check out his new granddaughter since her guardianship is being contested. They would know that Don wouldn't have the resources to do it.
Why has Grace not had talks with her dad. They can be VERY enjoyable and informative. Why does Grace not have an imaginary friend after all she has been through.
This is a VERY good story that I think could have been made better.

I hope Anne won't be to scared to scream her lungs out to get Don's attention.

I appreciate the length of each chapter since you provide a daily update. If it was tons of pages at one time I probably wouldn't read the whole thing. I would just skim through it just to get to the end.

Course

Stay your course.

Good story....excitement, romance and a bit of action....

Good story with a mix of action, romance and excitement to please almost every reader. I know that some of the characters seem a bit slow on the uptake but they have to be to drive the plot of the story. Actually, given the many horror stories in the news about failures of both the legal system and the child services system I guess that real life might actually be filled not only with people slow on the uptake but totally uncaring as well. The story is in any case well written and interesting.

isn't this the same page as before with only a few minor changes?

same board meeting
same promise of something major to happen
same jokes about his cooking skills
oh yeah, we have gone from 2 guys in the park to 3

Great.

Don't sweat the peanut gallery comments. Those that can, do; those that can't just nit-pick. Really enjoying the story.

Horseman, quit making comments, especially when they don't SAY anything.