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Late Night Pickup

byMaster_Vassago©
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by Anonymous

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by Flintstone5412/29/03

O'O'Yeah !!!

A great story ... Could use some descriptions of HER sxxy body,Like her petite/small breast.with pale pink auerola's,'N hard nipples,starting too turn red from the tension...

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by tinman69s01/02/04

great story--very hott

I love incest stories! And this is a good one for sure! Made me want to do her myself!

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by Anonymous03/14/04

I second...!

Great story.... but I second the idea of giving more descriptions.... that would have turned your great story into an amazing story. Keep up the great work!!!

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by Anonymous04/28/05

incest

more stories well done but maybe a little longer, would have been great to have dad or another bro. walk in thanks again very horney

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by Anonymous07/21/05

hot hot hot

I read this story with my sister then we fucked like rabbits

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by Anonymous08/07/05

You guys and your oversized cock fantasies

At least you didn't make her 38DDD

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by Anonymous02/15/06

Tops

good stuff

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by Anonymous08/15/06

thankuu

yay. thanku u made me cum! mmwa!

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by Toiletgenre11/21/08

What?

Too bloody abrupt, it reads like fifth-grade writing, is undeveloped, unedited, and quite honestly, it sounds like it was written by someone who's never had sex with a woman before.

Not to say that it doesn't have potential if it was written with a little more patience. Why even have them be brother and sister? There was no time to develop an... nevermind.

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by Anonymous05/11/11

Decent story but you need a little more story line instead of just jumping straight to sex. I'll give u 3 stars for it.

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by KrazyTaz1202/05/13

Hot

It was good hope there is more

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by Anonymous12/10/13

Fucking load of rubbish

By a wanker

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by Anonymous11/09/17

wtf

whats up with all the "honey"?

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