All Comments on 'Late Night Pickup'

by Master_Vassago

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Flintstone54Flintstone54over 20 years ago
O'O'Yeah !!!

A great story ... Could use some descriptions of HER sxxy body,Like her petite/small breast.with pale pink auerola's,'N hard nipples,starting too turn red from the tension...

tinman69stinman69sover 20 years ago
great story--very hott

I love incest stories! And this is a good one for sure! Made me want to do her myself!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
I second...!

Great story.... but I second the idea of giving more descriptions.... that would have turned your great story into an amazing story. Keep up the great work!!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
incest

more stories well done but maybe a little longer, would have been great to have dad or another bro. walk in thanks again very horney

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
hot hot hot

I read this story with my sister then we fucked like rabbits

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
You guys and your oversized cock fantasies

At least you didn't make her 38DDD

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
Tops

good stuff

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
thankuu

yay. thanku u made me cum! mmwa!

ToiletgenreToiletgenreover 15 years ago
What?

Too bloody abrupt, it reads like fifth-grade writing, is undeveloped, unedited, and quite honestly, it sounds like it was written by someone who's never had sex with a woman before.

Not to say that it doesn't have potential if it was written with a little more patience. Why even have them be brother and sister? There was no time to develop an... nevermind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago

Decent story but you need a little more story line instead of just jumping straight to sex. I'll give u 3 stars for it.

KrazyTaz12KrazyTaz12about 11 years ago
Hot

It was good hope there is more

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Fucking load of rubbish

By a wanker

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
wtf

whats up with all the "honey"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
Gay story 1 star

he fucked her asshole! YUK

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

I'm just happy sister was wearing stockings.

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