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I gave it 4 stars...
... It reminded me of the romantic comedies of the late 50s and early 60s, I enjoyed it.
That said I find it unlikely for any woman married or single, straight or gay to be so upset that she puts together an involved plot without mentioning the problem or perpetrator. To me that is the hole in the story.
Please keep writing, Panther fan.
Enjoyed it
But I'm surprised he is not more upset over the fact that she was making out week after week with this slug. Of course, she would only drive up there if she had actually planned on going in the first place. She was covering her tracks.
this is not a five star story
the only clueless one on this site is bonnietaylor2 for making stupid comments again. What will it take to shut her up?
I have a one word comment directed to Tom....
SUCKER!!!
Not your best
Sir: I often read your stories and enjoy them. Not to be critical but it just wasn't one of your best.
why
This is kinda shitty. If you don't have faith in the person to let them go thru life without wondering what they are doing, you shouldn't be in a "marriage. If a partner is willing to go thru so much BS just to play a "prank" on a person there is no room for them to expect reasonableness from their spouse.
Life is not the "game" you write about. This is not entertaining -annoying is more like it.. Then juvenile, sophomoric, ludicrous etc
this was one of the worst
Really, I got caught first so I decided not to do it, not to mention what happened in the parking lot. I know you like to avoid btb but a pathetic loser story is below you, or so I thought.
No how - no way
First off, I will freely admit that I am from the 'old school' and would never put up with any of the crap that this women was doing.
Having said that, had it been me on the Tuesday night in question, I would have ordered a drink and had it delivered to him on the dance floor with the message 'from her husband, enjoy'. I would have stayed long enough to see their reaction and then left and went home. I would also call all the husbands that I could and explain what was going on at these "Tuesday' gatherings.
I suspect she would return home shortly, sputtering her BS and trying to provide lame excuses for her conduct. I would continue with my 'to do' list of things to do to extricate myself from the relationship and marriage, but I would talk to her.The only question I would ask is: Was you actions within the boundaries of a solid marriage? I would tell her that I would never have anything to do with any stupid 'love' triangle and since she seemed so 'into' this guy that she would be happier with him rather than me, so I'm outta here! I would never want to stand between her and her true love.......
Finally, I would never be able to trust or believe her in the future and no relationship or marriage can last without them.
Just my thoughts....
until next time
story don't add up for me.
totaly glossed over , the weeks of dirty dancing & heavy petting in a public place & public show of affection between the two
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totaly glossed over the weeks of getting it on in the car in the parking lot
even if was no actual sex , was a lot of sh*t occuring for an hour or two each week in the car ...
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i have no problem with btb or raac storys ,i just like the stuff i read to actually make sense & fit together in a believable way.
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this story was sorta ok , but my biggest complaint would be that the ending just does not justify all the work that went into the rest of the tale.
story just fizzles out .. leaves the reader with an unfinished situation.
sure as sh*t there are a stack of unresolved issues regarding behavior , trust , honesty , integrity , decency , morals ....
not to mention commitment & love .
A Fool and his memory are soon parted.
Myra is a lying cheater. WTF was she doing mashing her pussy on another man's penis on the dance floor. If he buys that crap from those two lying bitches, he's toast.
stupid
a wife has no business necking with guys to "set them up" and "teach them a lesson". she is just a fucking liar.
lesson
She was not teaching a lesson, she was putting herself out there, basically conducting a practice run. The husband made a huge mistake returning to her, he needs to move on to a woman worthy of being a wife.
When
When most men would line up around the block so Myra could 'humiliate' them, you got a major problem in the story.
ITS TRUE THAT YOU CAN FOOL SOME OF THE PEOPLE
but the naive ones almost all the time. TK U MLJ LV NV
I Agree With The General Consensus
Myra and friends pulled off a fine horn-swoggle on their husbands and completed establishment of a foundation for going forward in life as cuckolding masters.
A real seesaw story
Congrats. Great story. Five out of five. I can't recall another story that had two confrontations over cheating and both of them seemingly incorrect. I found it very intriguing. And as always a JPB story is well written with just a couple of typos.
As a constructive criticism I think Tom was a little too forgiving the second time. Even if the wife was telling the truth, she was way, way out of line. Her actions at the bar bordered on unforgiveable. And the second meeting with Myra's potential lover needed more explanation and reflection by Tom, despite the support from her friend's husband about the other guy being her brother.
Trust once lost is hard to recover. So he could easily have stayed at a hotel for a week to think about whether he wanted to stay married.
Still it was a very good story.
Cheers
Steve
Timeline error
When Myra left for the weekend at the spa she rode with Bev (Friday night), they were talking about George and went to call him off.
But Tom went to see George THE NEXT DAY. (Saturday)
Not up to JPB standards. Nothing erotic, and superficial and uninteresting characters.
**
If anyone knows about fags on this site it's you Dear Annony!!!!
You have sucked more cocks than a $20 whore in NYC!! gave this a 5!
NOT THE BEST
Myra is a cheating spouse... Hubby is slow on the uptake and did not come to the reality of the situation... I give this a three. Which is low for a JPB story
Piss Poor Story At Best!
She's a lying, cheating bitch, and he's a fool for forgiving her and caving into her wims. Eventually she'll cheat and say she was setting the guy up for whatever reason.
Just another cuck..
Bonnietaylor2.. You muff diving bitch... Get out of here.. You man hating cunt,.. You couldn't get a real man if you had to.. You brain dead moron... Al, you could hope to get is another ducky wimp.. Who probably has as many dieseses as you.. As for this guy.. Just another cuck..
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