Train Ride with Mom

Excellent!

There is a line that separates pornograohy from eotica. It is a subtle, almost ethereal ,difference. Your story is high quality erotica. It titillates without being graphic.

Brsvo!

Sweet

never had something for supernatural stories but this one is great and I love how the mom got more and more aroused

WOW

I've read many supernatural stories but this one is very intense. The taboo element makes it more interesting and exciting

Yum

Another fantastic story from one of my favorite authors here on Lit. Fun story!

yea

Great and so hot. ..loved it and f

excellent tail er tale! you have spun a wonderful beginning, would love to learn more of their pasts and future!

Wow!

I know that most of what is on here is fantasy or just a fuck story. This one was a few levels about that! The sex (well written) was part of the story and not "the story". No baseball bats for cocks or huge breasts. You describe those body parts but left the rest to our imagination. When I read the heading of how this was a supernatural experience. I had a preformed opinion of where this story was going to go. Well, I was wrong and I was glad that I was wrong. You went in a direction I never saw coming, no pun meant. Good job. Very good read.

Well...

Not a big fan of fantasy and sci-fi but was hot and well written. ***

Great story yet again

Great story! loved it. However it would be interesting to see a story written by you with a more romantic style, love and lust.

At first I wasn't so sure but then I was blown away

Didn't expect to enjoy it as much as I did, have to admit that the whole supernatural thing had me worried. But it was for nought as it turned out to be a very interest and arousing story with just the right amount of mysticism to make it a worthy read.

Great Story!

Now this is a perfect example of erotica over porn. I loved it! Saw no problems or mistakes in your writing either. GOOD JOB!

outstanding and highly original

I've always found HA's stories to be exciting (as well as very well written), but this one is in a class by itself. The pace is remarkable, slow and steady. As his mother describes the dream that possesses her, her son remembers that "like most young males, I've had incestuous fantasies before." The first part of that statement is so true. The very special, the unique love of a mother and her male child, whether either is conscious of it or not, always has an undercurrent of lust. The attraction of a son for the vagina he came out of and the fascination of a mom for what makes her boy a boy, his fat young penis and his heavy loaded balls. And the second part of the statement makes what follows seem totally natural. The son gets hard, harder than he's ever been before, and when he touch-tests his mother's vagina--just to make sure everything's okay, you understand--it's soppy wet. Might as well explore around a bit, so he finger-fucks her. Hmm, nice. The kid's so excited he's about to burst. No sense blowing his balls all over the place, time to get that penis up inside that vagina."My cock slid inside of my mother and it felt right. It was a perfect fit. It was the way it was meant to be." Of course it was. It's a boy's cock up inside his own mother's cunt, where it just fucking belongs. He'll be giving his mom periodic semen injections every full moon, together with great convulsive cums. Meanwhile, there'll be lots of cocksucking and cuntslurping, happy dirty fun between a loving mother and her loving son.

Awesome story!

But there's only one problem... it left me wanting more!!!

Great job once again... i think this has some serious potential as a series

Can you get another ticket for me

Yours truly would love to give the queen a taste of my 9 inch tool! Just say there is no boy that could change a tire with there tool. My queen would be in pain to walk so lots of pussy eating would take place.

Hope you write a part 2

Great story

Loved the story, the old witch has blessed this mother son with the ultimate gift, the removal of the incest taboo, now incest serves as a catalyst of lust as it should. Once the mother drops her guard and allows her son to mount her body and piston his young cock into her pussy they will rithe in pleasure and receive the ultimate orgasm the incest orgasm. Mommy has had her inhibitions washed away and will crave her son's loving embrace and constant sexual pursuit. As for the son he has entered paradise as he now has his loving mother to carcass his body as he fondles his mothers breasts, hips, and swirls his tounge against his mothers as he Pistons his hard unprotected cock into his sexy mothers fertile womb over and over until he fills her with his potent seed. This is the ultimate sexual fantasy of many men to have their mother satisfy their sexual needs and if conditions allow to make their mother a mother again. Thanks again for this great story that had me hard as a rock.

Sweet story. The only thing I missed is that there is no description of mother's looks. You know, color and style of hair, color of eyes, those small pieces. But that really doesn't matter that much. It's great. And squirting women are such a big turn-on.

Incest

It really isn't my thing. But you did a very good job putting the reader into the story. Well done.

A little more research maybe?

Its jarring that you refer only to "Eastern Europe". Couldn't you just pick a country and city?

nicely done for a two page story. got into it. jimwho

same as title

I'm jealous.

fantastic, a well told story. thank you

Really?

MrReaderMan, if we tell you it was Moldova, will that finally take care of your blue balls? HeyAll, for your next story i want to know the sons favourite video game and the mothers preferred recipe for apple pie. Thanks for the story, i managed to cum just fine.

awesome

Good tastefully done

awesome!

wow... just super-erotic... i love these kinds of stories with plots.. thanks a lot for writing this wonderful piece

Good plot

Most mother/son incest stories are based on fixation with each others bodies. The story of the gypsy lady was a welcome difference and made me curious of what lay ahead in the story.

A Long Way

You have come a long way since your early submissions . Thus is real first class escapist erotica some who have cum in mum report it as being the ultimate orgasm .
I will take your word for it

Another great one!

Fantastic plot, perfect length, and wonderfully erotic. Keep 'em coming!!!!

A CLASS STORY

THIS WONDERFUL STORY WAS THE BEST THAT I HAVE EVER READ HERE...YOU HAVE ELEVATED SEX BETWEEN MOTHER AND SON TO A BEAUTIFUL AND LOVING PLACE THAT WILL REMAIN ALONE ONLY TO BE ADDED TO BY YOUR CREATIVE MIND...THANK YOU

incredible

5 star my friend. pure wonderful.

One of The Best.. Next Chapter Please

It was one of the most Erotic and Thankfully Happy Ending story. Would like to read further. Please update the chapter with some naughty stuff in Home.

AMAZING

I loved it!!!!!!!

Another great story from you

Have you considered more elaboration in continuing this story line? I'm certain I am not the only one that would like to see more chapters of this. Maybe more visions or a return trip to her ancestor's homeland? Possibly a reading for the son that reveals something from his father's ancestry?

Good one

A good erotic story I have read after many days........

Awsome

This is one of the best erotic stories I've ever read. The story itself, is intriguing, mesmerizing!

Very nicely done.

Very nicely told story, that was believable (yeah, why not?), and very hot. The sex scene could have been longer, but...
This was a very good erotic story.