Or the same old tired trope that tries to legitimize dissipation and narcissism as enlightened.
The writing is good if repetitive. The characters have changed little. How long before Gwen is doing porn for the benefit of her cuckold hubby. Sad mindset. But if that's what they want.... to each his/her own, but don't try to pass this off as evolved or enlightened. You only fool yourselves.
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Anonymous10/16/15
GREAT STORY!
I really like the story and eagerly await more chapters.
No one makes a person read a story. If one is so narrow minded, submit your own stories.
Thanks for your efforts BB!
I'm a middle age gentleman and I love the story. It is nice to be able to read a nice logical progression of Gwen to sexual security. Please keep the story going the way that it feels to you and not to the naysayers.
Wonderful chapter, your are doing a great job at advancing the story. Keep up the good writing.
On another note, I checked on palewriter, surprise surprise no stories. Not sure why someone feels the need to make negative comments. If I don't like a story I pick another from the 1000's on this site or others.
Anyway Have a great day to all.
Tom
A nice continuation of the story but much less activity and story development than some others. This was one of the less interesting chapters for me - but still 4 *.
Still, it was interesting and well written (except for referring to Gwen's mother as Natalie Curran rather than Irene Curran - Natalie is her sister-in-law).
I would like to see the story with Cricket develop more and I would like to see some opening up between Gwen and her daughter, Ali. Also, more involvement with the owners of the lakeside property.
I look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story. It is exciting with out being rude. It seems like it could really be happening because the pace just seems so natural. Thanks for all you time and talent.
English
Nothing new about this way of seeing things...
Or the same old tired trope that tries to legitimize dissipation and narcissism as enlightened.
The writing is good if repetitive. The characters have changed little. How long before Gwen is doing porn for the benefit of her cuckold hubby. Sad mindset. But if that's what they want.... to each his/her own, but don't try to pass this off as evolved or enlightened. You only fool yourselves.
GREAT STORY!
I really like the story and eagerly await more chapters.
No one makes a person read a story. If one is so narrow minded, submit your own stories.
Thanks for your efforts BB!
Nice Reading
I'm a middle age gentleman and I love the story. It is nice to be able to read a nice logical progression of Gwen to sexual security. Please keep the story going the way that it feels to you and not to the naysayers.
Great chapter, story just keeps getting better
Wonderful chapter, your are doing a great job at advancing the story. Keep up the good writing.
On another note, I checked on palewriter, surprise surprise no stories. Not sure why someone feels the need to make negative comments. If I don't like a story I pick another from the 1000's on this site or others.
Anyway Have a great day to all.
Tom
Great buildup!
Very sexy writing, with a lot of sexual tension. I want to read more from you.
A more 'low key' chapter.
A nice continuation of the story but much less activity and story development than some others. This was one of the less interesting chapters for me - but still 4 *.
Still, it was interesting and well written (except for referring to Gwen's mother as Natalie Curran rather than Irene Curran - Natalie is her sister-in-law).
I would like to see the story with Cricket develop more and I would like to see some opening up between Gwen and her daughter, Ali. Also, more involvement with the owners of the lakeside property.
Curious
How many here have their own "I caught my parents" story?
I got home early from my fast-food job. Walked past their door and saw them in a Sixty-Nine! Wow! So my predilection for oral sex may be genetic?
Anyway, a good chapter, I like how Melody is caught off guard by Gwen. Nice touch.
Excellent
Very good as usual
thank you
what a wonderful series, so many possibilities for the well defined characters to explore. Awesome writing more please!!
Great Story
I look forward to the next installment of this wonderful story. It is exciting with out being rude. It seems like it could really be happening because the pace just seems so natural. Thanks for all you time and talent.
Not there, not this time?
Interesting, very interesting!
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