Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman), however the Taliban in Afghanistan frequently executed women caught in adultery, even though Alla forgives adultery (Qur'an (39:53) . Some of the readers seem to have strong Taliban leanings, (100 lashes be dammed... bring on the bullets).
Hater of the Taliban
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Anonymous10/18/15
Wonderful Story!
Great story to teach a lesson to cheating wives. There is a big difference between a "Hot" wife and a "Cheating" wife. The first takes lovers with her husband´s approval and knowledge; the second is a dishonest sneak.
My wife has spread her legs for a lot of guys during our marriage. However, she has never cheated on me. Mellisa got what she deserved and justice was dished out by a cool, calm professional. This story was very, very well written and exciting.
Excellent ! Absolutely cold revenge, that's exactly what should happen to errant cocks. Better yet, wear a mask and make him survive without his cock.
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Anonymous10/18/15
You cut off the predators cock = automatic 5 stars. Sorry, but can't give you any extra for blowing the bitch's brains out.
Is this some kind of research project? Two stories in two days with very different male characters and outcomes. Guess which one is getting the higher vote! Just seems suspicious that you would submit such opposite stories.
Neither story is very good, but you gotta give credit where credit is due. Too bad you couldn't leave the now dickless asshole to live his life peeing into a plastic bag. You know, you could have cut off her clit instead of putting her out of her misery. I know, I know, can't leave any witnesses. Still, death is just too quick and painless for some transgressions.
I hope someday you will take on the real issue that you ignore or avoid in most of your stories: why did she cheat? No, not for cock, not for orgasms, and not for lust. Men cheat for sex. Women cheat for psychological and emotional reasons, and JPB does not like to explore or expound on those reasons. Too bad. Such great plots and characters, yet such empty endings.
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Anonymous10/18/15
from Duna again
I can see I MUST write the wife murder is not BTB in the 99.9% of the stories several times.
If the husband or the assassin of the husband kill the lover of the cheating wife when they plan a common life after the divorce it may be BTB to eliminate the future spouse of the soon to be cheater ex wife (if the police could not investigate or it was organized to accident), because the living ex wife should start alone instead of her second marriage.
The wife murder is not BTB but sad Consequence!
The media are full of spouse murders in all over the World and these are sad tragedy.
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Anonymous10/18/15
Bob
where the hell did you do your service? You seem to know very little about spec ops and the type of man they require. Your guy is straight out of Hollywood central casting which means pure BS.
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Anonymous10/18/15
I don't like people dying but for what they were doing to him it's worth it . A little far fetched but a good read
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Anonymous10/18/15
a bit far fetched but.......
It really seems to have pissed off jpb's cream pie eating fan base. Fuck those nutless fruitcakes and their latent homosexual ways. Cheating cunts deserve to die. My qualm with this is Melissa was dead before he shot her. Why? Unless the bull was extremely under endowed, the act of forcing the disembodied cock into her throat with a ball gag chaser doesn't leave much breathing room. Mind you I'm no medical expert but I've heard of females dying from time to time after accidentally biting their lover's cock off, usually preceded by a moving vehicle abruptly stopping against a solid object. But hey, it was nice to read something that wasn't your run of the mill btb or jpb tale. I never bitch about far fetched plots cause it's nice to see a writer using imagination.
The fact is that JPB can not win from the comentators. Even I get irritated when he has
a husband sit in a closet watching through the key-hole. The funny thing is that when I was child it was considered quite normal for a husband to kill cheating wives and their lovers before committing suicide, but if they went to court they could plead temporary insanity. Nowadays the husband's guilt is treated differently, but if I does not kill things could get worse yet selling all he owns to divide things up with her. Personally I would have offered her the house in exchange for the business free and clear.
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Anonymous10/27/15
Top knotch
Real good BTB.
Not a very nice guy at all the protagonist.
by
Anonymous11/04/15
wow
who are you, and what did you do to that wimp JPB?
Well focused non wimp non consenting cuckold. Simplest of form and straight forward. Of course this could've been extended to a long long story with lots of tension and drama. It deserves a five stars because it has great characters who don't take crap.
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Anonymous01/01/16
Yep
just as it should be. Also great story writing author.
- Always prefer a Cheating Wife Story where the husband gets his revenge but in this one he's made a big mistake. When the bodies were discovered,finding the lovers sliced off cock in the cheating wife's throat makes it a VERY PERSONAL execution. Maybe the detectives will go for the MOB connection,but I think they'd look long and hard at the husband for quite awhile.
- (Too bad hubby didn't slice off Turner's balls and shove them down the cheating twats throat too! And while he was at it,chop off her clit and stick it in Turner's mouth. WTF,if it's gonna get gross and violent anyway,why not go for the whole ball of wax?!
re:
There seem to be a lot of Taliban readers here.
Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman),
---------------
However; the 'Old Testament' says the punishment is stoning to death with stones.
And even the 'New Testament' says that to marry after divorce is adultery.
So the only way to marry another is to have the adulterous partner die.
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Anonymous02/02/17
WELL DONE!!!
I have to say, this is a very satisfying tale. In the long run who really cares about a cheating sluts excuses for cheating. Not really relevant, all that matters is that she did it and should be appropriately punished. How very sweet that the person she chooses to cheat with gets the same punishment.
English
There seem to be a lot of Taliban readers here.
Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman), however the Taliban in Afghanistan frequently executed women caught in adultery, even though Alla forgives adultery (Qur'an (39:53) . Some of the readers seem to have strong Taliban leanings, (100 lashes be dammed... bring on the bullets).
Hater of the Taliban
Wonderful Story!
Great story to teach a lesson to cheating wives. There is a big difference between a "Hot" wife and a "Cheating" wife. The first takes lovers with her husband´s approval and knowledge; the second is a dishonest sneak.
My wife has spread her legs for a lot of guys during our marriage. However, she has never cheated on me. Mellisa got what she deserved and justice was dished out by a cool, calm professional. This story was very, very well written and exciting.
Goodbye Mellisa!
LIKE
A very nice BTB story.
5 star
Excellent ! Absolutely cold revenge, that's exactly what should happen to errant cocks. Better yet, wear a mask and make him survive without his cock.
You cut off the predators cock = automatic 5 stars. Sorry, but can't give you any extra for blowing the bitch's brains out.
Is this some kind of research project? Two stories in two days with very different male characters and outcomes. Guess which one is getting the higher vote! Just seems suspicious that you would submit such opposite stories.
Neither story is very good, but you gotta give credit where credit is due. Too bad you couldn't leave the now dickless asshole to live his life peeing into a plastic bag. You know, you could have cut off her clit instead of putting her out of her misery. I know, I know, can't leave any witnesses. Still, death is just too quick and painless for some transgressions.
I hope someday you will take on the real issue that you ignore or avoid in most of your stories: why did she cheat? No, not for cock, not for orgasms, and not for lust. Men cheat for sex. Women cheat for psychological and emotional reasons, and JPB does not like to explore or expound on those reasons. Too bad. Such great plots and characters, yet such empty endings.
from Duna again
I can see I MUST write the wife murder is not BTB in the 99.9% of the stories several times.
If the husband or the assassin of the husband kill the lover of the cheating wife when they plan a common life after the divorce it may be BTB to eliminate the future spouse of the soon to be cheater ex wife (if the police could not investigate or it was organized to accident), because the living ex wife should start alone instead of her second marriage.
The wife murder is not BTB but sad Consequence!
The media are full of spouse murders in all over the World and these are sad tragedy.
Bob
where the hell did you do your service? You seem to know very little about spec ops and the type of man they require. Your guy is straight out of Hollywood central casting which means pure BS.
I don't like people dying but for what they were doing to him it's worth it . A little far fetched but a good read
a bit far fetched but.......
It really seems to have pissed off jpb's cream pie eating fan base. Fuck those nutless fruitcakes and their latent homosexual ways. Cheating cunts deserve to die. My qualm with this is Melissa was dead before he shot her. Why? Unless the bull was extremely under endowed, the act of forcing the disembodied cock into her throat with a ball gag chaser doesn't leave much breathing room. Mind you I'm no medical expert but I've heard of females dying from time to time after accidentally biting their lover's cock off, usually preceded by a moving vehicle abruptly stopping against a solid object. But hey, it was nice to read something that wasn't your run of the mill btb or jpb tale. I never bitch about far fetched plots cause it's nice to see a writer using imagination.
Just Plain Mean Bob.
High and tight. Military style.
Wow!JPB is still alive!
he is one of the most prolific authors on the whole net.He must be over 80 years-old now.Glad you are still writing!
I like it
she is done cheating with a dong in her mouth.
Five stars *****
Excellent!!! Missed your writing.
a BTB if ever
I wonder if Porter will have an accident?
Interesting remarks and fiery story
The fact is that JPB can not win from the comentators. Even I get irritated when he has
a husband sit in a closet watching through the key-hole. The funny thing is that when I was child it was considered quite normal for a husband to kill cheating wives and their lovers before committing suicide, but if they went to court they could plead temporary insanity. Nowadays the husband's guilt is treated differently, but if I does not kill things could get worse yet selling all he owns to divide things up with her. Personally I would have offered her the house in exchange for the business free and clear.
Top knotch
Real good BTB.
Not a very nice guy at all the protagonist.
wow
who are you, and what did you do to that wimp JPB?
Cool
Well focused non wimp non consenting cuckold. Simplest of form and straight forward. Of course this could've been extended to a long long story with lots of tension and drama. It deserves a five stars because it has great characters who don't take crap.
Yep
just as it should be. Also great story writing author.
The Anti-Wimp But...
- Always prefer a Cheating Wife Story where the husband gets his revenge but in this one he's made a big mistake. When the bodies were discovered,finding the lovers sliced off cock in the cheating wife's throat makes it a VERY PERSONAL execution. Maybe the detectives will go for the MOB connection,but I think they'd look long and hard at the husband for quite awhile.
- (Too bad hubby didn't slice off Turner's balls and shove them down the cheating twats throat too! And while he was at it,chop off her clit and stick it in Turner's mouth. WTF,if it's gonna get gross and violent anyway,why not go for the whole ball of wax?!
@Anonymous 10/18/15 Hater of the Taliban
re:
There seem to be a lot of Taliban readers here.
Sharia law dictates that one caught in adultery gets 100 lashes (man or woman),
---------------
However; the 'Old Testament' says the punishment is stoning to death with stones.
And even the 'New Testament' says that to marry after divorce is adultery.
So the only way to marry another is to have the adulterous partner die.
WELL DONE!!!
I have to say, this is a very satisfying tale. In the long run who really cares about a cheating sluts excuses for cheating. Not really relevant, all that matters is that she did it and should be appropriately punished. How very sweet that the person she chooses to cheat with gets the same punishment.
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