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by Anonymous10/16/15

Nice story

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by Anonymous10/17/15

Good story.......

It was a good story, however there were a few editing flaws. I wasn't able to give it a full 5 stars for that. I did enjoy reading it. It was a good plot and I wish it could have been longer. Please continue to write, there is a lot of potential there in your writing.

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by Anonymous10/22/15

Really needs editing, would have been nice if it was longer also

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