Oversimplification of Amy Ch. 01

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Nice take on an old topic. Easy to read and leaves me wanting more. Thanks.

More please sir..

I liked it. Good lead in, hope we get to see more of this story.

I kept getting confused

if he was a junior at Uni why were there adult chaperones at the school dance? and in the school gymnasium? that sounds more like high school. nor do I remember bells sounding the end of a class in classrooms beyond the lower levels.
it just seemed a bit out of place for a pre law student.

NICE BEGINNING

Looking forward to seeing more.

Ages? Uni? but they need chaperons? Are they really legal age? Did you read this to yourself or just write and submit?

Since when do they have chaperons in COLLEGE/UNI?