...That was a very special, hot message, that you made for her! I hope she enjoys and appreciates.
This art piece you've got here now, is different on a number of levels from the first one you submitted to literotica, but none of them are at all negative. Simply different. It's a case of apples and oranges. Narration style or speaking to/"with", the listener, themselves, is one of those differences.
Both are set in the second person format of writing/speaking; but I think doing this kind of presentation, the 'speaking directly to/with' method, has GOT to be one of the hardest, if not THE hardest types of audios to make! But you did very well at it. And, you've gained confidence and developed more too, IMO, an easier, more fluid for yourself, rhythm and vocal presentation finesse.
Very enjoyable to listen to, and it got even better, further in!
by
Anonymous10/30/15
Loved it hun
That got me so wet baby. A tantric massage would make it perfect.
by
Anonymous11/04/15
Very sexy story, it made me come really hard. It felt like I was there with you!...can't wait to hear more...I love your accent, I find it hard to listen to some of the guys on hear but not you...
Thank you!! Knowing others have listened to what you made for me makes it even hotter and made me cum harder than the first time I heard it!!
Thank you for sharing it....
💋
English
I'm sure she must be, because...
...That was a very special, hot message, that you made for her! I hope she enjoys and appreciates.
This art piece you've got here now, is different on a number of levels from the first one you submitted to literotica, but none of them are at all negative. Simply different. It's a case of apples and oranges. Narration style or speaking to/"with", the listener, themselves, is one of those differences.
Both are set in the second person format of writing/speaking; but I think doing this kind of presentation, the 'speaking directly to/with' method, has GOT to be one of the hardest, if not THE hardest types of audios to make! But you did very well at it. And, you've gained confidence and developed more too, IMO, an easier, more fluid for yourself, rhythm and vocal presentation finesse.
Very enjoyable to listen to, and it got even better, further in!
Loved it hun
That got me so wet baby. A tantric massage would make it perfect.
Very sexy story, it made me come really hard. It felt like I was there with you!...can't wait to hear more...I love your accent, I find it hard to listen to some of the guys on hear but not you...
From your dirty little girl
Thank you!! Knowing others have listened to what you made for me makes it even hotter and made me cum harder than the first time I heard it!!
Thank you for sharing it....
💋
your voice...
....that was such a turn on!!! Thanks for making me cum...
I love a Paddy like a Paddy loves liquor.
Amazing
My pussy if fucking throbbing now! Incredible story, I came so hard I started crying!
fuck me
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