All Comments on 'Welcome To Her Nightmare'

Nice fantasy. Maybe she should think in the first person, especially if you are going to quote her thoughts. And maybe you could draw it out a bit. Some people just don't like reading very short stories.

Some people may not like short stories, but I do!! If you are looking for a story that gets right to the point and doesn't bore you with wasteful details, then this is it! Just the right amount of detail and steamy story telling! Can't wait for the next one!!

I don't mind short stories. I like them almost as much as some of the longer ones, but this story is not written very well. I mean honestly, "growl like a pirate"? You should definitely have an editor look over your stories before you publish them.

it was pretty good.. i have some fantasies like that, so it got me going.... im glad it didnt have a crapload of useless details too... good job!

You got me nice and wet with this story.