Six Weeks of Grace Pt. 10

I dunno, I kinda liked your typos throughout the story. It was a little like dropping a bit of MadLibs fun into it. ;)
The important thing was you told a great story. Strong plot, solid three dimensional characters. Bang up job. Very entertaining. Condensed would be fine, but posting on a site such as Lit lends itself to the more serialized format. Most readers around here have short attention spans. :/ The cliff hangers were well developed and spaced.

Loved it

without doubt the best story of october.
i really don't like the 2 or 3 page penny packets that Authors seem to prefer these days .. i would much rather read it in one , two or three parts of 10 pages.
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having said that . it's the best story of the month , i should proly also say it could have been much longer , the overall premise & plot for the story was delightful , however it could have used alot more dialogue & would have benefitted from more in depth and expansive scene setting .
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not really worried about the editorial / typo issues , coz for me they did not cause any major problem or detract from the story in any overly noticable way ..
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thoroughly , totaly ,absolutely .. a pleasure to read .
well worthy of 5 stars
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Hey,

I would love it if you wrote more stories. This is one of the finest stories I have come across and I have been reading on this site for over 10 years.

Both your stories were great! You really know how to write a saga!

Cheers!

Thanks!

Great story, with enough suspense and romance to keep it interesting.

Look forward to the next series.

Thanks for sharing.

C

Gotta agree

with pretty much every recent comment. To summarize, some of the main points from my fellow commentors are as follows:
- loved it, keep writing!
- loved it, keep writing!
- loved it, keep writing!
Oh, everyone has generally the same comment...........big surprise.
Even still, I agree with all the aforementioned comments.
Gotta say though, one long story is preferrable to me just so I don't have to keep returning to the author submissions page to access the next chapter.
Loved the plot. Never saw that Anne would be unable to carry. I thought it would end up being a prior messy divorce, just like ALL (I don't actually mean all) the other Romance stories on Lit. I kinda like it when the heroine is a tsundere.
Maybe I just like Marvel too much, but it almost seemed like a Hulk story. If you replace Don with the Hulk, and Anne as Black Widow, and pretend that Hulk had a very un-Hulklike daughter, then that is the backstory of the characters. On the other hand, maybe I'm overthinking this like I aways do.......
Anyways, I liked how it's different than the other stuff on Lit. Well done, and five stars all the way.

Amazing!!

One of the best stories that i have read. Once i started reading it i couldn't stop. Great Job.

brilliant story

aabsolutely brilliant story , one of the very best ---well done , and thank you write4food

Lovely story

LOL, can't tell my wife how much I loved this story!
You have great skills as a story teller, don't stop now.

This story was osama! Gerrit gerrit,no? Anyway,very very good story. You really could write4food,yknow? Gerit gerrit? :D

Great story

Read it all in one day and thoroughly enjoyed it .. predictable? sure but still a great tale.
Its interesting that most of the top rating stories on an erotic site aren't erotica.

5 stars great story.

Great characters. It's nice to fantasise that a huge firm of lawyers wouldn't get away with it as they would in our reality. Even if he could keep his daughter they would skate on the charges and end up billing the estate for all the time they spent fighting him. So essentially he would be paying them millions to try and take his daughter away from him. Lawyers..they always get paid.

Blown Away

It's not often a take can get me to years like this one did. Thank you for writing this amazing story.

Need to sleep

it's 4 20 am, don't need to say more, try for a great story, pls keep writing 😍Ty from Norway

Wow

Great story, would have liked to know a little more of Libby's history or back ground, but then again it could be another story??? Well done!

Nicely Done

What a great idea for a story. Your characters were so well developed and likable I miss them already. Your writing allowed the story to flow effortlessly, really making it fun reading. Thank you for the great entertainment, a real treat. This is the first story of yours I've read and I'm already a fan. With talent like yours, I hope you continue to write. Take Care

Pure narrative perfection....

Please do not stop writing!!😃

A First

I've read almost every story this place has to offer over the last couple of years, yet never have I been inclined to comment...... until now.

Fantastic story. From a man who values the written word as an elixir, thank you for your efforts.

Thank You

A great story, Thank you for sharing your talent....

KOed

You just made a grown ass man cry!

Just Super.

Exceptional in so many ways. Hooked from beginning to end. To repeat previous comment: !!!!!!!

Didn't even notice the no sex

Most the time i just use crappy stories to get off guess you got a good enough suspense to keep it interesting and make it easy to forget why we're on this site

heart touching

Excellent story and please share more of your works

Exceptional story, very well written, great characters

Can't get enough of this story

I've read this story 3 times now and it's on my favourites list.

WOW!

Were it up to me you would eat for life. I selfishly beg for more like this. Thanks for great read.

Thank you for sharing

What a great story. Thank you for These great moments .
I don't know where to start it was great to See this love grow and the story continue.
Would love to read more like this...

a reason to read

A great example of writing.. Touching and with a great story and characters

Excellent.

Nice story that was well written.
5*

What happened?

The story was so engrossing I read it again. And loved it again.

Others have encouraged you to keep writing, we're still waiting :)

So Satisfying 🙂

Absolutely one of the best and most absorbing stories on the site by a gifted story teller.