I'm betting she has absolutely No problem rooting off her husband for alimony so that he can support herself and her cave boy since the cave boy isn't skilled enough to do anything but hunt st ray dogs and give amazing sex. I guess being a cave girl means turning into an amoral piece of shit who is no longer bright enogh to think for herself.
Unlikable heroine, ending that kisses villain ass, equals ruined story.
I think the story should last longer in the tribe!
I think your story should last until the next "coming of age" ceremony. But there should be a twist, like Nick going for a younger woman. Both Eve and Nick stay in the tribe but the two couples fight against one another to see who can make the other more jealous. You should also attempt to do something with the "Powers that be" and reveal some backstory or how they are "pulling the strings". I really love this series of you and I hope you keep it up!
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Anonymous10/22/15
I want Nick to find a partner!
I'd love to see Nick find a cave partner to go wild with!
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Anonymous10/22/15
Can Eve slowly become more primitive?
Like Eve becoming so used to this society she starts acting like a cavewoman and everything! Towards the end, have her make a deal with Nick or something to stay in the tribe for something revolving the book!
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Anonymous10/22/15
I really hope Nick and Eve get back together!
It'd be awesome to see the two finish their year within this Stone Age society but at the end have them finally relinquish their love, have a revealing truth, and what would it all hold for Blake! I thought adoption was hinted at in this chapter! Love the series!
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Anonymous10/22/15
Eve shouldn't just leave Nick!
Give us more in the wild world! It's great!
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Anonymous10/24/15
wishful thinking and lies
Even if Nick finds that something that would take him away from Eve, there can be no way that this ends well. There will be blood! The question is, how much and by whom. Never underestimate a cornered and wounded animal. That is what Nick is becoming.
English
But how does it end?
There has to be a little more.
what a sellout bitch
I'm betting she has absolutely No problem rooting off her husband for alimony so that he can support herself and her cave boy since the cave boy isn't skilled enough to do anything but hunt st ray dogs and give amazing sex. I guess being a cave girl means turning into an amoral piece of shit who is no longer bright enogh to think for herself.
Unlikable heroine, ending that kisses villain ass, equals ruined story.
5
for a very good story!!
I think the story should last longer in the tribe!
I think your story should last until the next "coming of age" ceremony. But there should be a twist, like Nick going for a younger woman. Both Eve and Nick stay in the tribe but the two couples fight against one another to see who can make the other more jealous. You should also attempt to do something with the "Powers that be" and reveal some backstory or how they are "pulling the strings". I really love this series of you and I hope you keep it up!
I want Nick to find a partner!
I'd love to see Nick find a cave partner to go wild with!
Can Eve slowly become more primitive?
Like Eve becoming so used to this society she starts acting like a cavewoman and everything! Towards the end, have her make a deal with Nick or something to stay in the tribe for something revolving the book!
I really hope Nick and Eve get back together!
It'd be awesome to see the two finish their year within this Stone Age society but at the end have them finally relinquish their love, have a revealing truth, and what would it all hold for Blake! I thought adoption was hinted at in this chapter! Love the series!
Eve shouldn't just leave Nick!
Give us more in the wild world! It's great!
wishful thinking and lies
Even if Nick finds that something that would take him away from Eve, there can be no way that this ends well. There will be blood! The question is, how much and by whom. Never underestimate a cornered and wounded animal. That is what Nick is becoming.
love it
when a woman becomes a complete WONTON...
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