by StardustGal
It's a bit odd to hear a story written in first person, with a male lead character, read by a woman. Perhaps a story told from a woman's point of view might better suit your vocal talents.
I hope you got Ccnyman's permission before posting this story.
Thanks, Dark_Storm, but she had my permission. It was actually a gift she gave me and I'm a little jealous others can hear it now.
You have a wonderfully smooth and sexy voice and you read this very well. But I didn't like it because I was a man listening to a another mans account of sex read by a woman, it just didn't work for me. Also there was a bit that just didnt make sense- here was a girl he had the hots for, he was about to have sex with her and he wasn't even hard! What a turn off - if I was her I'd be really dissapointed.
I'd love to hear more from you but maybe next time from a womans point of view? Keep up the good work!
I really like your voice. You should keep producing. . I would listen. :)