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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/01/04

Nature's birth control

A little physiology lesson here: Most women don't ovulate while they're nursing. In theory, it's nature's way of making sure mothers can deal with one child before having another.

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by Anonymous01/01/04

Story too short

This story is too short. Why cut it off here?

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by SlickTony01/02/04

Revenge is Best When Served Cold

The story could use a bit of copyediting.

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by Anonymous03/16/07

sucked!!!

this story blows BIG ass chunks!!! You really need to work on it before submitting such crap!!!

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by Anonymous01/23/09

when its at that point?

why stay around?

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by Anonymous09/13/09

Very Weak!!

Hey you wasted my time. I see you have not submitted a story in a long time. I understand why.

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by Anonymous02/17/14

Well that was bad

Too mechanical. No emotion. UGH!

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by rightbank06/07/14

moving on

nothing to see here.

meh .

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by nancyharpman1708/03/16

If Hubby Won't Perform, Why Not?

If I was married to Will, I certainly would make babies [plural] with Stan. Fantastic story.

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