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Great story
Great building of a story line. But the chapters are too short, but I will follow this story anyway. Keep up the good work!
Great story
I'm really enjoying this.
Keep it up!
it is hard to maintain a thought
when we have to keep closing out and starting up again, and again, and again
I like This Style****
Your writing style is a good fit for this story line, I do not know how it will work with future stories. Thanks for sharing.
If Short is Your Problem, rightbank ...
... I suggest you copy & paste all of them into one document then save it to your hard drive so you can read it all at once (&/or repeatedly). I've done that frequently both for stories with multiple short chapters or those with too many annoying typos. I edit those for my personal pleasure so I can read the story without frothing at the mouth over glaring grammatical/spelling errors (it's/its, to/too/two, their/there/they're, rein/reign/rain, etc.).
Another option I've used is to open all the chapters/pages in the beginning but on different tabs so it's a quick click to the next.
Thank you, SSL, for your beautiful writing.
nthusiastic
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