All Comments on 'Nursing Girls'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
great story

this left me dripping. So authentic, so exciting. I once read a story about aliens and 2 humans. The aliens had long tongues with a ball type object at the end of it. The tongues were so long that they penetrated the womb. They even did a good clean up job.

Thanks for an outstanding and stirring story! I loved it!

Buck_NekkedBuck_Nekkedover 20 years ago
My all time favorite Sci-fi tale

I love every sex filled second of this story. Thanks for you time and vivid imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
MORE - MORE

I wish there were more stories like this

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wow

That was Intense totally intense I loved it you could almost expierence the atmosphere it was like watching a Movie

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
outstanding

I happen to come to this story by chance while surfing the Non-Human Stories, after I have read it (3times already) I found it very incredeable and very well written, you must have a very vivid imagination, I sincerely hope that you will continue to write more stories of this caliber,

just outstanding

Joey

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Holy Hell! Fucking Awesome!

wow this was an excellent story....

very hot, even my imagination coudlnt come up wiht soemthing as sexy as this...

VixandraVixandraalmost 18 years ago
Tenticsl Goodess!

Rarely is a non-human story this good.

Some anatomy oddities but still wonderful.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
Very Erotic and Non-harmful to anyone

From Imagination75: I like this story because it flows, does not hurt anyone, is very erotic, and turned me on.

It is well-written with none of those annoying grammatical or continuity mistakes that spoil enjoyment of other stories.

Very good - I will add you to my favourites.

Thank you for your writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
o my gosh

more turned on then EVER before from reading a story,

it only made me sad that such animals DIDNT exist,

please keep writing,

i loved it,

elle

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
a little wierd, but a great wierd

Your story was erotic and alluring, and furthermore gave me a real uncomfortable feeling without actually hurting anyone, and that is a subtlety of the art form of sci/fi and horror writing, keep up the great work. I enjoyed the entire piece, it flowed well, and to be honest, the creature still remained very alien and slightly scary almost in spite of what it was doing...

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Damn!

Hotter than hell! Thats the most turned a story has made me in awhile. Very well written, excellent grammer,and the plot just flows like a river. Keep up the good work! Jay.

barepussloverbarepussloveralmost 15 years ago
WOW!!! Intense!

Love a good tentacle story. This one is extremely good and very hot. Please more? O:-)

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
sooooo hot

you made my knickers wet reading this!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
begging for more...

aww, why did the creatures leave?

I wanted to read some more... and more... and more...

wow, that was intense, I thought of changing my panties, but after reading on I am so turned on by the liquid in MY pussy...

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I'm am a straight Mom, but now I'm not so sure I would love to do that with my girlfriends. I played with myself the whole time I was reading it, I would also love to meet a monster that gave that sort of pleasure

Darth_FugueDarth_Fugueabout 13 years ago
Missing some scenes...?

I went to your Webpage, that has the Graphic version!

(At first, I thought that "Graphic" meant "more 'INTENSE' Sexual Situations" but, as it turns out, YOU meant "a 3-D Model, CGI-based, COMIC BOOK... with very-little-emphasis, on the term 'COMIC'!")

Still, I liked it!

...One thing that I did notice, however, is that some of the scenes were "Altered!" So, it's kind of difficult to distinguish which came first (Oops! Sorry, My Bad!): the Graphic "Novel", or the Text version, that is here?

(Most notably: the Lake Scene, where the girls go swimming, has been deleted [?], from the Graphic Version!)

Again: I LIKED IT!!! (The story, that is!)

To checkout his Webpage, goto the his "Contact" Tab, and click-on the word, "Webpage" OR...

...in your Address Bar, type-in "3dmonsterstories.com", and then, go from there...!

Darth_FugueDarth_Fugueabout 13 years ago
Oops! Almost Forgot...!

I agree — you SHOULD bring the girls, and the monsters, BACK... for some more "Monster-Loving Fun!"

It would be nice to see what happens, when they're "reunited"! ;)

...Maybe... The girls will become "forever dependent" upon the creatures...? ;)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Good Story

Good Story yo

more than that you Should make a Sequal

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
love it!

pleaase write more this is to hot

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Goddamn

This story always always gets me hot. Please please write more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
wet

please write more, im always so wet

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
nursing girls

i enjoy your stories , though with the samecharacters page after page it gets a little boring but you write very erotic stories . the mind control could have involved the invading of the girls dreams imaginning themselves having filthy sex with groups of men , ond men , even animals , push the boundaries and explore the possibilities , and dont stop writing , its difficult to find good stories like yours .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Story

This was an epic story, what is the more graphic version called?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
more

Really loved the story would love for it to continue!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
wow ! great story

This was a very interesting story and so hope it will have another story for this summer when the girls return to the Lake ! Please Loved the story !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

good read. nice story development.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
My Nigga what

Wat the fresh fuck

88girfriend88girfriendover 1 year ago

I enjoyed this story very much. Thank you for sharing it.

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