by homealone_447
this left me dripping. So authentic, so exciting. I once read a story about aliens and 2 humans. The aliens had long tongues with a ball type object at the end of it. The tongues were so long that they penetrated the womb. They even did a good clean up job.
Thanks for an outstanding and stirring story! I loved it!
I love every sex filled second of this story. Thanks for you time and vivid imagination.
That was Intense totally intense I loved it you could almost expierence the atmosphere it was like watching a Movie
I happen to come to this story by chance while surfing the Non-Human Stories, after I have read it (3times already) I found it very incredeable and very well written, you must have a very vivid imagination, I sincerely hope that you will continue to write more stories of this caliber,
just outstanding
Joey
wow this was an excellent story....
very hot, even my imagination coudlnt come up wiht soemthing as sexy as this...
Rarely is a non-human story this good.
Some anatomy oddities but still wonderful.
From Imagination75: I like this story because it flows, does not hurt anyone, is very erotic, and turned me on.
It is well-written with none of those annoying grammatical or continuity mistakes that spoil enjoyment of other stories.
Very good - I will add you to my favourites.
Thank you for your writing.
more turned on then EVER before from reading a story,
it only made me sad that such animals DIDNT exist,
please keep writing,
i loved it,
elle
Your story was erotic and alluring, and furthermore gave me a real uncomfortable feeling without actually hurting anyone, and that is a subtlety of the art form of sci/fi and horror writing, keep up the great work. I enjoyed the entire piece, it flowed well, and to be honest, the creature still remained very alien and slightly scary almost in spite of what it was doing...
Hotter than hell! Thats the most turned a story has made me in awhile. Very well written, excellent grammer,and the plot just flows like a river. Keep up the good work! Jay.
Love a good tentacle story. This one is extremely good and very hot. Please more? O:-)
aww, why did the creatures leave?
I wanted to read some more... and more... and more...
wow, that was intense, I thought of changing my panties, but after reading on I am so turned on by the liquid in MY pussy...
I'm am a straight Mom, but now I'm not so sure I would love to do that with my girlfriends. I played with myself the whole time I was reading it, I would also love to meet a monster that gave that sort of pleasure
I went to your Webpage, that has the Graphic version!
(At first, I thought that "Graphic" meant "more 'INTENSE' Sexual Situations" but, as it turns out, YOU meant "a 3-D Model, CGI-based, COMIC BOOK... with very-little-emphasis, on the term 'COMIC'!")
Still, I liked it!
...One thing that I did notice, however, is that some of the scenes were "Altered!" So, it's kind of difficult to distinguish which came first (Oops! Sorry, My Bad!): the Graphic "Novel", or the Text version, that is here?
(Most notably: the Lake Scene, where the girls go swimming, has been deleted [?], from the Graphic Version!)
Again: I LIKED IT!!! (The story, that is!)
To checkout his Webpage, goto the his "Contact" Tab, and click-on the word, "Webpage" OR...
...in your Address Bar, type-in "3dmonsterstories.com", and then, go from there...!
I agree — you SHOULD bring the girls, and the monsters, BACK... for some more "Monster-Loving Fun!"
It would be nice to see what happens, when they're "reunited"! ;)
...Maybe... The girls will become "forever dependent" upon the creatures...? ;)
i enjoy your stories , though with the samecharacters page after page it gets a little boring but you write very erotic stories . the mind control could have involved the invading of the girls dreams imaginning themselves having filthy sex with groups of men , ond men , even animals , push the boundaries and explore the possibilities , and dont stop writing , its difficult to find good stories like yours .
This was a very interesting story and so hope it will have another story for this summer when the girls return to the Lake ! Please Loved the story !